Although I give you props for keeping this fanfic steady for so long since I know how hard it is, the fanfic itself just isn’t great.
Mind you, I only read through 3 chapters, so my opinion isn’t exactly great since everything could change for all I know, but the story itself is just so… cringe.
I mean, Octavia is suddenly willing to die for him (when I say suddenly, I really mean it. They barely even know each other), and then a few seconds later, she walks out, leaving him. Ah, did I mention that the entire drama started because of a seat belt? Yeah, Bellamy didn’t want him to be unseatbelted(?) Like what? He would’ve gotten out sooner or later. No need to go pointing a gun at him.