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Guard_the_Azkaban
Guard_the_AzkabanLv211mth
2024-04-04 13:47

Almost 5 Stars from me. One of the best TWD FF I've ever read. Although there are debatable points, that is not a very big problem since there are always disagreements with a story, in my opinion it has a very consistent and organic development, a system that, although it is a central point of the FF, does not take up much of the time. Mc and is proportional to the difficulty of the world, which does not make the mc too OP and a slave to the system, the character development is also one of the best I have seen and puts the points in place about what it is like to live in a world apocalyptic, overcoming his past traumas little by little and realistically. The development of the world is progressive and constant, which gives a solid image of the future. The only thing I would argue is how little he lacks his knowledge from his previous life, he should know that it is essential to pay more attention to firepower, I don't understand why he doesn't visit Fort Benning and take the weapons that were probably abandoned there and thus strengthening your base.

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