Rewriting this review in a more official way.
TL;DR: I wish I could rate things 6*.
Writing Quality, 5*: Best I've seen in a while. As someone who is better at finding critiques than writing compliments, I would like to make it clear that that is the reason why my review might not be so detailed, because I quite literally cannot find a flaw. The story captures the nail-biting suspense required of an apocalypse story perfectly and it just makes for SUCH an exciting read man, I cannot express enough just how interesting the author makes this story.
Stability of Updates, 5*: In my deleted review I rated this a 4 but the frequency of chapters have drastically picked up since I made the review, and given the insanely high quality of the chapters makes it so I have no complaints.
Story Development, 5*: The story is fast-paced when it needs to be, and slow-paced when it needs to be, never is there a time where you may think you wish the pacing was done differently. The character development of the MC is extremely enticing to watch.
Character Design, 5*: Replicates canon characters well and manages to make OC's more intriguing than the main cast which is the greatest compliment I could bestow on a fanfic quite frankly. This story truly stands out from the rest of the Walking Dead fanfics due to how powerful of an impression the OC's make on you, enemies included.
World Background, 5*: The world of The Walking Dead is well replicated and the presence of well-written original enemies and original plotlines combine to make a really well-functioning, immersive, world that feels like it moves on it's own.
Without a shadow of a doubt this fanfiction is the makings of a masterpiece. :P