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funmaxwell
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I'll be honest I couldn't make it past the first chapter because it was so stupid. as the main character wasted his wishes on dumb things like having the combat experience of Archer from Fate stay night because the Mc wanted the ability to defend himself in close quarters. which Archer doesn't specialize in as he specializes in long distance combat. it would have been more rational for him to wish for the combative experience of a character like baki hanma. then the second wish is somehow worse than the first as he simply wishes to be tough without specifying how tough. so this wish could go wrong so badly as God in the story could just make him slightly tougher than the average Joe or tougher than any character in fiction. but it's the fact he didn't think to specify that just proves how stupid he is. then he wishes for the ability to understand all languages. which is useless in Star wars as there's freaking droids that can translate just about every language. if he'd used this wish for knowledge form a more advanced sci-fi universe he might have picked up the knowledge on how to build a universal translation device. as such things are pretty common in sci-fi. also I feel like I should point out his reasoning for picking this wish was he was concerned with not being able to understand the people around him. but it's pointless because babies and children learn languages much easier than adults. as his brain would have naturally picked up on the language easily. on top of that he thought he was reincarnating on Earth. this just makes it even dumber.

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Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

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Finnish_man
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Bro its not about archer bro but the guy who wanted his abiliteis he did not try to get immortality or essances like the blank or anything like that but bad wishes like tough or allspeak i mean like archer experience is good but he could have gotten somethin like the second true magic

DaoistJhtAYc:🤨🤨 no tf he doesn’t…his first ever mastery was in dual swords, and considering the fact that his Noble Phantasm is literally a reality with unlimited swords it would stand within reason that he had a mastery in them, he just preferred using a bow though yes he had a mastery in it.. just like how merlin had a huge mastery with the sword but was a mage.. and don’t forget his ability which allowed him to create copies of any and all weapons which he wouldn’t be able to use if he didn’t learn how to properly use them, also wasn’t there literally fights where he fought using cqc? 🤨
DaoistJhtAYc
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🤨🤨 no tf he doesn’t…his first ever mastery was in dual swords, and considering the fact that his Noble Phantasm is literally a reality with unlimited swords it would stand within reason that he had a mastery in them, he just preferred using a bow though yes he had a mastery in it.. just like how merlin had a huge mastery with the sword but was a mage.. and don’t forget his ability which allowed him to create copies of any and all weapons which he wouldn’t be able to use if he didn’t learn how to properly use them, also wasn’t there literally fights where he fought using cqc? 🤨

POIX
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There’s a reason why EMIYA is always summoned as an Archer, because if he was summoned as a Saber he would be to op lol.

ExArgentum
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I hate that Webnovel doesn’t show the highest rated review on the novel page first if the author highlights other reviews. Wish I read this before reading.

Dante_Hellscythe
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Archer does prefer the archer approach, he does not have mastery using the blades in unlimited blade works, with the overall exception of Kanshou and Bakuya, he can only use other swords because when he traces anything he understands the history of what he traced making him able to somewhat copy the user of those weapons, he does knows swordsmanship but its nothing that can reach servant level, the only blades he ever trained with were his yin yang swords by copying other users of twin blades to create his own style. In fact, he cant even be summoned as a Saber.

DaoistJhtAYc:🤨🤨 no tf he doesn’t…his first ever mastery was in dual swords, and considering the fact that his Noble Phantasm is literally a reality with unlimited swords it would stand within reason that he had a mastery in them, he just preferred using a bow though yes he had a mastery in it.. just like how merlin had a huge mastery with the sword but was a mage.. and don’t forget his ability which allowed him to create copies of any and all weapons which he wouldn’t be able to use if he didn’t learn how to properly use them, also wasn’t there literally fights where he fought using cqc? 🤨
DaoistJhtAYc
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Didn’t he literally use swords and CQC against servants before and held his own though? Heck I remember him fighting I think Lancer using his dual swords and held his own, though he lost, that would put his mastery of it near or at the very threshold of servant level. Just because he can’t be summoned as saber doesn’t make his mastery of it any less than it is.

Dante_Hellscythe:Archer does prefer the archer approach, he does not have mastery using the blades in unlimited blade works, with the overall exception of Kanshou and Bakuya, he can only use other swords because when he traces anything he understands the history of what he traced making him able to somewhat copy the user of those weapons, he does knows swordsmanship but its nothing that can reach servant level, the only blades he ever trained with were his yin yang swords by copying other users of twin blades to create his own style. In fact, he cant even be summoned as a Saber.
Dante_Hellscythe
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Like I said, it's not his 'actual' mastery but a consequence of using Unlimited Blade Works that allows him to understand how to use those blades in a satisfying manner. Without UBW, he does not have servant level sword skills.

DaoistJhtAYc:Didn’t he literally use swords and CQC against servants before and held his own though? Heck I remember him fighting I think Lancer using his dual swords and held his own, though he lost, that would put his mastery of it near or at the very threshold of servant level. Just because he can’t be summoned as saber doesn’t make his mastery of it any less than it is.
DaoistJhtAYc
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It still doesn’t mean he don’t have it and his mastery in dual swords is his own. He could lose unlimited blade works and keep it so it’s his mastery and what he used to fight lancer. Even with the fact that what you said is true it’s still a mastery and something he have because it comes from his ability which means the original comment is still incorrect.

Dante_Hellscythe:Like I said, it's not his 'actual' mastery but a consequence of using Unlimited Blade Works that allows him to understand how to use those blades in a satisfying manner. Without UBW, he does not have servant level sword skills.
Dante_Hellscythe
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Yes, he has twin blade mastery, but it still supported by the stories of other twin swords, he basically imparted some useful techniques from twin blades users into Kanshou/Bakuya, meaning without UBW he loses them, not only that but his style is specifically made to use his swords as disposable, so unless weapon creation is used it becomes another thing that makes his mastery weaker. TL;DR: Archer's mastery without UBW is not that good.

DaoistJhtAYc:It still doesn’t mean he don’t have it and his mastery in dual swords is his own. He could lose unlimited blade works and keep it so it’s his mastery and what he used to fight lancer. Even with the fact that what you said is true it’s still a mastery and something he have because it comes from his ability which means the original comment is still incorrect.
ChaosKami
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Dante_Hellscythe:Yes, he has twin blade mastery, but it still supported by the stories of other twin swords, he basically imparted some useful techniques from twin blades users into Kanshou/Bakuya, meaning without UBW he loses them, not only that but his style is specifically made to use his swords as disposable, so unless weapon creation is used it becomes another thing that makes his mastery weaker. TL;DR: Archer's mastery without UBW is not that good.
TJ_Rose
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You should never make a review on things if you judged archer combat ability based on his name. That isn’t even his real name, I bet you actually thing Merlin a great Mage because of his name is Merlin smh you should get banned

funmaxwell
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TJ_Rose:You should never make a review on things if you judged archer combat ability based on his name. That isn’t even his real name, I bet you actually thing Merlin a great Mage because of his name is Merlin smh you should get banned
LuluViBritania
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Lol EMIYAS combat experiance is entirely lacking in all things except Archery all of his close combat technique is taken directly from the weapon he is holding at the time and not actually his

DaoistJhtAYc:🤨🤨 no tf he doesn’t…his first ever mastery was in dual swords, and considering the fact that his Noble Phantasm is literally a reality with unlimited swords it would stand within reason that he had a mastery in them, he just preferred using a bow though yes he had a mastery in it.. just like how merlin had a huge mastery with the sword but was a mage.. and don’t forget his ability which allowed him to create copies of any and all weapons which he wouldn’t be able to use if he didn’t learn how to properly use them, also wasn’t there literally fights where he fought using cqc? 🤨
DaoistJhtAYc
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That still doesn’t mean he doesn’t have a mastery of swords or cqc. If you can use it whether from the use of an ability or not it is still a mastery. I honestly don’t understand how that’s so hard for people to understand, that’s like saying just because you got a degree doesn’t mean you know anything about the subject you have one in because any knowledge you gain is from someone or something else. If you wish for all of Archer knowledge it will more than likely include the knowledge he learns when he read the history of the weapons he create and that’s not counting that he himself have used his twin swords in actual combat which means that even if he lost his unique ability it wouldn’t just delete the muscle memory he gained from creating his own style of dual swords from the history he have read, heck in just the beginning he used them to fight almost in equal to lancer until he started getting overwhelmed which speaks value since lancer is a cqc master in the lance. People keep looking at mastery as whatever the hero can be summoned as but that doesn’t prove the person can’t use it to a high degree. There is also no way to get rid muscle memory, is he lost his ability he more than likely will still be able to gain most of his dual sword mastery it would just take time. Heck I don’t think most people knew about Merlin mastery of the sword until it was pointed out clearly in the series. If the author is following the principle that his knowledge includes what he learns when he creates weapons then there is nothing odd about this Mc being able to use the sword to an abnormally high degree.

LuluViBritania:Lol EMIYAS combat experiance is entirely lacking in all things except Archery all of his close combat technique is taken directly from the weapon he is holding at the time and not actually his
Dante_Hellscythe
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Oh boy, here we go again...'If you can use it, whether from an ability or not, it is still a mastery'.Incorrect. The skill to use swords by copying the history of people who used them is something only a user of UBW can do. The MC in this one does not hold UBW, so he can't do that.'If you wish for all of Archer's knowledge it will more than likely include the knowledge he learns when he read the history of the weapons he creates'.Incorrect. To actually start learning from the history of a weapon, he would need to seriously try to reach into its core. An example of something like this is Shirou vs. Berserker, where he learned Nine Lives Blade Works by tracing Berserker's weapon. Then why does he not try to do that with everything? First, because it takes a severe toll on his brain and second, because Archer does not have enough talent to use everything anyway. If he tried to learn from it, it would get in the way since a lot of ways to use a sword would come to mind at the same time. That's why he only transferred history to his favorite pair of yin and yang swords and created a style for it and why he rarely, if ever, uses another weapon for close combat. But this style is a way to use UBW to its maximum potential not a standalone thing.'In the beginning, he used them to fight almost equal to Lancer'.He got disarmed nearly instantly... He could keep up because he could make more and still ended up disarmed 26 more times as well because of Lancer's wariness towards his unknown phantasm.'I don't think most people knew about Merlin mastery of the sword'.This situation is different, we didn't know Merlin like we know Archer. One is a mystery, the other we see with all of his skills on display.TL;DR: Archer is not a good swordsman, but is a master at using UBW, so, it would have been better to choose UBW.*mic drop*

Maverick_sfx
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Thanks a lot for the heads up

Aady_Shrestha
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Archer’s little one more skilled servants in the Nasuverse having a literal eternity to train up his skills in combat. The only reason he doesn’t destroy the other servants is because of his weak stats.

Doruk_C
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Yeah, and I thing People realy don’t read the lore. Archer literally can keep up with other servants in cqc because of B+ rank minds eye. He even mentions this himself, telling he has worse skills and reaction than lancer, but he can predict it in advance. Even then he still can’t win that fight.

Dante_Hellscythe:Oh boy, here we go again...'If you can use it, whether from an ability or not, it is still a mastery'.Incorrect. The skill to use swords by copying the history of people who used them is something only a user of UBW can do. The MC in this one does not hold UBW, so he can't do that.'If you wish for all of Archer's knowledge it will more than likely include the knowledge he learns when he read the history of the weapons he creates'.Incorrect. To actually start learning from the history of a weapon, he would need to seriously try to reach into its core. An example of something like this is Shirou vs. Berserker, where he learned Nine Lives Blade Works by tracing Berserker's weapon. Then why does he not try to do that with everything? First, because it takes a severe toll on his brain and second, because Archer does not have enough talent to use everything anyway. If he tried to learn from it, it would get in the way since a lot of ways to use a sword would come to mind at the same time. That's why he only transferred history to his favorite pair of yin and yang swords and created a style for it and why he rarely, if ever, uses another weapon for close combat. But this style is a way to use UBW to its maximum potential not a standalone thing.'In the beginning, he used them to fight almost equal to Lancer'.He got disarmed nearly instantly... He could keep up because he could make more and still ended up disarmed 26 more times as well because of Lancer's wariness towards his unknown phantasm.'I don't think most people knew about Merlin mastery of the sword'.This situation is different, we didn't know Merlin like we know Archer. One is a mystery, the other we see with all of his skills on display.TL;DR: Archer is not a good swordsman, but is a master at using UBW, so, it would have been better to choose UBW.*mic drop*
Jester_Advocate
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use overwrite boom fix all of your problems like bruh overwrite or the boring name of reality manipulation

midgetydeath
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He could go the Revan route and take the language knowledge from other beings’ minds.

DetachedDreamer
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thanks for the heads up! I'm out!