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2023-03-04 19:42

Oh Dear Author.....I love you so much for creating this amazing piece of work.....I would really like to beat myself for starting this story so late...... It's such a nice work....and one thing that I liked the most was how the author picked the clichés .....I have nothing against who enjoy them....but what the author did with them was so good. And please don't get me started on He Yuan.....he is such a good MC....I absolutely love this guy.....I just want to hug him so badly......He deserves so much love. The work is really nice....the background, the pacing of story and every little thing can be seen that it is well thought out....and about the LMS arc.....don't feel bad about it author.....because the new one is really good....and I have the reasons you told for removing the previous version......and I feel like they are very much right......this new approach is quite nice.... I just hope people get to know more about this story..... and we have a GONG MC....😌 Take care author and good luck. ❤️

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Melted_OreAuthor

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!😭😭😭😭😭

Blackgirl_stephLv3

Uhm is it gay Novel?

Melted_OreAuthor

yup

Blackgirl_steph:Uhm is it gay Novel?
OneandonlyEJLv4

He Yuan is the TOP?? Or bottom ?

run_eLv14

Top...it's written in the description

OneandonlyEJ:He Yuan is the TOP?? Or bottom ?
OneandonlyEJLv4

Oh, I just didn't understand it. I rly love top mc do you have any recommendations

run_e:Top...it's written in the description
run_eLv14

The only ones which I can recommend right now are " Villain Saving System " and Captured By The Cold Detective ". Both are by the same author 'Delanasiwarka'

OneandonlyEJ:Oh, I just didn't understand it. I rly love top mc do you have any recommendations
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Phew ok, I'm going to try and not ramble too much. Me coming across this book was a complete accident that happened like 2-3months ago maybe?? Then I decided to pick it up and boy... it's so good bro. Honestly speaking, it's probably in the top 3 of my fav qt novels and top 5 of fav novels at the moment. Everything seems pretty well thought out and genuinely it's a very interesting and unique novel that gave me a refresher. The arcs explored in this novel are fairly common(there's really so much you can do) but this one puts sucha unique and fun littel spin on every arv that keeps me hooked. I wish I had more free time so Ii could read this masterpiece more. What's appreciated by me personally here is that, although the arcs can be considered fairly short, the characters feel very real. The behaviors and reactions they have towards things feel like how actual people would react. A personal favorite is arc 2 where we get shown the aftermath of what hapoens after our favorite protagonist leaves. It feels real. I don't want to give spoilers because I believe that this book is a jouney you have to travel yourself. Just a personal preference, I also really like the fact that the arcs aren't too long. That's actually what causes me to drop qt novels most of the time, arcs start at like 20 chapters and eventually get to 200+ per world and I get tired and sick of it. The pacing overall is very well done and everything seems like it's on the right track and it's truly an enjoyment to read. I definitely recommend this novel to anyone looking to pick it up. Great work author and thankyou for writing this book <333

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