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Melted_OreAuthor2yr
2022-09-19 16:21

Chapter at the time of this review; 100 Arc at the time of this review; 4th Update stability at the time of this review; 2 chapters a day The first arc was a little rusty but that was because I didn't want to bore you guys but a reader brought to my notice that it was more like a retelling of events (thank you by the way) so from the second arc upwards, there was more dialogue and details. Before you give up on the book please kindly read to the third arc. The romance is slow burn but I promise, you would hardly notice with all the other stuff going on. I try to avoid clichés and repetitive plots in the arcs to give you all a fresh reading experience in a popular trope (QT) so please give it a chance. I gave myself five stars because I have to be my own biggest supporter, lol. See you in the comment section. XoXo

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NOBODY_BLLv14

Hi super interested in your novel just want to know when the cp will get together. Like what arc?

Melted_OreAuthor

After the next arc😊😊😊

NOBODY_BL:Hi super interested in your novel just want to know when the cp will get together. Like what arc?
NOBODY_BLLv14

so in the 2 arc?

Melted_Ore:After the next arc😊😊😊
Melted_OreAuthor

yes😌😌

NOBODY_BL:so in the 2 arc?
Melted_OreAuthor

I was going through my reviews and I suddenly felt I wasn't clear. when I said two arcs from now, I meant two arcs from the current 'Little Mandron Soldier' arc and not the 2nd arc🥲🥲🥲 Sorry if there had been a misunderstanding😬😬😬. Each arc is quite enjoyable though. (I know I'm being biased cause it's my work but.. oh, well...lol😁😁)

NOBODY_BL:so in the 2 arc?
NOBODY_BLLv14

Oh thanks! Wow, that is quite a slow burn!!!!! I read a little, and it is indeed very good!

Melted_Ore:I was going through my reviews and I suddenly felt I wasn't clear. when I said two arcs from now, I meant two arcs from the current 'Little Mandron Soldier' arc and not the 2nd arc🥲🥲🥲 Sorry if there had been a misunderstanding😬😬😬. Each arc is quite enjoyable though. (I know I'm being biased cause it's my work but.. oh, well...lol😁😁)
Melted_OreAuthor

thank you☺️☺️

NOBODY_BL:Oh thanks! Wow, that is quite a slow burn!!!!! I read a little, and it is indeed very good!
Chains_of_EnkiduLv3

Oh!!! It’s me from Wattpad Leriamn, and I finished Little Mandron soldier! I really enjoy your book so much!! Can’t wait to see my favorite CP get together [img=Loving it]

Melted_OreAuthor

HEY!!! Welcome. Glad you're here🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Chains_of_Enkidu:Oh!!! It’s me from Wattpad Leriamn, and I finished Little Mandron soldier! I really enjoy your book so much!! Can’t wait to see my favorite CP get together [img=Loving it]
Chains_of_EnkiduLv3

OF COURSE!!!! Im sorry for not chatting to you on wattpd like usual! I’ve been busy with school and catching up like crazy!! Anyway your book is still my all time favorite system story! It’s just too good for me to choose another! Aaaa 888 my dear shou I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!!! Sighh im too obsessed

Melted_OreAuthor

I'm glad you like it😊😊😊

Chains_of_Enkidu:OF COURSE!!!! Im sorry for not chatting to you on wattpd like usual! I’ve been busy with school and catching up like crazy!! Anyway your book is still my all time favorite system story! It’s just too good for me to choose another! Aaaa 888 my dear shou I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!!! Sighh im too obsessed
Chains_of_EnkiduLv3

I LOVE IT!!! Lol you have done an amazing job on this book! It deserves all the attention it has for the wonderful effort put into it! ❤️

CharliemiloLv12

Gong mc… gong mc? Gong mc! I’m so happy… a GONG MC!!!

The_Snow_EmpressLv14

Really is it??? OMG!!! YES!!!

Charliemilo:Gong mc… gong mc? Gong mc! I’m so happy… a GONG MC!!!
the_divine_beingLv4

when will you update this?

the_divine_beingLv4

It has been three months since any update.Please update as soon as possible.

SublimenightLv14

Welcome back

Melted_Ore:After the next arc😊😊😊
Rain_0000Lv4

thank God you are updating ..... your loyal reader was waiting eagerly 🧐🧐🧐🧐

AvLuve13Lv14

I just started reading this and am already impressed, it is so well-written and intriguing. I’m very excited to continue! I hope you are doing well, author, thank you for this story!

DaoistuDJitSLv1

Hello, author. When are you planning to write the next chapters? Did you already drop this novel? This is such a great series, and I can't get enough of it. I've been waiting for the next update for several months now, despite knowing that the last update was almost a year ago.

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chaosgoddessLv10

Phew ok, I'm going to try and not ramble too much. Me coming across this book was a complete accident that happened like 2-3months ago maybe?? Then I decided to pick it up and boy... it's so good bro. Honestly speaking, it's probably in the top 3 of my fav qt novels and top 5 of fav novels at the moment. Everything seems pretty well thought out and genuinely it's a very interesting and unique novel that gave me a refresher. The arcs explored in this novel are fairly common(there's really so much you can do) but this one puts sucha unique and fun littel spin on every arv that keeps me hooked. I wish I had more free time so Ii could read this masterpiece more. What's appreciated by me personally here is that, although the arcs can be considered fairly short, the characters feel very real. The behaviors and reactions they have towards things feel like how actual people would react. A personal favorite is arc 2 where we get shown the aftermath of what hapoens after our favorite protagonist leaves. It feels real. I don't want to give spoilers because I believe that this book is a jouney you have to travel yourself. Just a personal preference, I also really like the fact that the arcs aren't too long. That's actually what causes me to drop qt novels most of the time, arcs start at like 20 chapters and eventually get to 200+ per world and I get tired and sick of it. The pacing overall is very well done and everything seems like it's on the right track and it's truly an enjoyment to read. I definitely recommend this novel to anyone looking to pick it up. Great work author and thankyou for writing this book <333

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