Review Detail of zako4 in The Extra's Odyssey
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Reincarnation in a cliché novel written as a cliché novel. Characters are one dimensional and pretty bland. They have their one personality trait and it heavily defines them. Not a lot of smart characters. A lot of the chapters are rather skippable honestly. A lot of generic ideas, some portions were nice sections to read though. MC is your typical reincarnated reader/author with near photographic memory who faces "struggles" gathering OP items or rather are really just gifted to them.
The Extra's Odyssey
Ryukurou
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I read all your free chapters. Just because I said they're skippable doesn't mean I skipped them. My opinion was that I didn't like the story enough to spend coins after the free chapters. It was too predictable and generic with nothing truly special that I don't find it worth continuing. After reading ever so many books, you will find these cliches and similar plots but some are able to keep you engaged with unique characters, crafty dialogue or a vivid world. This story didn't do it for me, that's all.
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Thanks for pointing these things out. I do have planned a lot of things for my novel but I'm trying to add them slowly into the worldbuilding rather than doing info-dumps. This is what might make some chaps fell as 'skippable'. I'll try my best to improve the shortcomings you've pointed out :D
zako4:I read all your free chapters. Just because I said they're skippable doesn't mean I skipped them. My opinion was that I didn't like the story enough to spend coins after the free chapters. It was too predictable and generic with nothing truly special that I don't find it worth continuing. After reading ever so many books, you will find these cliches and similar plots but some are able to keep you engaged with unique characters, crafty dialogue or a vivid world. This story didn't do it for me, that's all.
I have 2 comments in regarts to your review. 1. I as a reader appreciate how you didn't equate cliche to bad 2. while I agree the character could have more to them as far as beind 1 dimensional, it is still far more than most self-insert characters that are oh so common.
zako4:I read all your free chapters. Just because I said they're skippable doesn't mean I skipped them. My opinion was that I didn't like the story enough to spend coins after the free chapters. It was too predictable and generic with nothing truly special that I don't find it worth continuing. After reading ever so many books, you will find these cliches and similar plots but some are able to keep you engaged with unique characters, crafty dialogue or a vivid world. This story didn't do it for me, that's all.
Ryukurou:Thanks for pointing these things out. I do have planned a lot of things for my novel but I'm trying to add them slowly into the worldbuilding rather than doing info-dumps. This is what might make some chaps fell as 'skippable'. I'll try my best to improve the shortcomings you've pointed out :D