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Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor2yr
2022-09-05 02:20

Shameless 5-star review from the author :) This is my first novel, so I hope you guys will give feedback and constructive criticisms that can help me improve. Don't hesitate to add your experience and reviews of the novel! Also, treat this review as a Q and A section.

The Extra's Odyssey

Ryukurou
4.4
240 Chs

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Radpiplup
RadpiplupLv14

will there be romance, will there be harem?? I hope there will be no harem as in only 1 female lead

2yr
13
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

No harem. Only one Fl.

Radpiplup:will there be romance, will there be harem?? I hope there will be no harem as in only 1 female lead
2yr
48
Radpiplup
RadpiplupLv14

omg ur so cool

Ryukurou:No harem. Only one Fl.
2yr
21
R0Y
R0YLv13

I read till 66 ch its still in early development and story always depicts mystery and vivid actions of the extra. I can only review honestly after the book completes it's world building before going into action and I hope the author all the best for your exams and career and please do not stress and can complete the book slowly as I say *A completed book 100 times better than a half worked dropped book* completed books give reader's connect to the author and make them realise who the author is through their own work

2yr
10
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

Thank you for taking your time and writing this ╰(▔∀▔)╯

R0Y:I read till 66 ch its still in early development and story always depicts mystery and vivid actions of the extra. I can only review honestly after the book completes it's world building before going into action and I hope the author all the best for your exams and career and please do not stress and can complete the book slowly as I say *A completed book 100 times better than a half worked dropped book* completed books give reader's connect to the author and make them realise who the author is through their own work
2yr
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HL0426
HL0426Lv4

Do u have a discord link

2yr
1
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

No, there is no discord for TEO atm.

HL0426:Do u have a discord link
2yr
3
HL0426
HL0426Lv4

oh, well no problem

Ryukurou:No, there is no discord for TEO atm.
2yr
Arrow_569
Arrow_569Lv4

planing to open a discord server ?

2yr
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

that will depend, if readers want it I will make one in future ^-^

Arrow_569:planing to open a discord server ?
2yr
Mashrur_Nipun
Mashrur_NipunLv4

is it harem?

2yr
ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

Haven't read this (yet) but I like the cover

2yr
El_Eru2000
El_Eru2000Lv11

very good author, personally I have read up to chapter 138 and I have a total of 3 questions, I would appreciate the answers 1- Will the protagonist learn to use magic without grimoires? because apparently he is focusing solely on his art at the moment. 2- Eth and Caim will get a body in the future? I know it could be a spoiler but I'm very curious how those 2 will develop. 3- What is Nathan's favorite color? :3

2yr
1
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

1- Yes, he will learn magic in future 2- Can't answer that cuz it's a VERY big spoiler 3- Red

El_Eru2000:very good author, personally I have read up to chapter 138 and I have a total of 3 questions, I would appreciate the answers 1- Will the protagonist learn to use magic without grimoires? because apparently he is focusing solely on his art at the moment. 2- Eth and Caim will get a body in the future? I know it could be a spoiler but I'm very curious how those 2 will develop. 3- What is Nathan's favorite color? :3
2yr
1
El_Eru2000
El_Eru2000Lv11

Thank you very much for answering, have a happy holidays

Ryukurou:1- Yes, he will learn magic in future 2- Can't answer that cuz it's a VERY big spoiler 3- Red
2yr
BELLdom
BELLdomLv2

Hi, I am Bell, and i am new to this app. So, i also want to write my novel here. Just asking for some advice, as a junior ☺️☺️☺️

2yr
1
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

I'll be happy to help. You can talk to me in discord if you have something to ask. Here's my I'd: Ryukurou#1456

BELLdom:Hi, I am Bell, and i am new to this app. So, i also want to write my novel here. Just asking for some advice, as a junior ☺️☺️☺️
2yr
2
Voidz_Zero
Voidz_ZeroLv14

y is there romance and a aniti hero tag? Q and A right?

2yr
Ryukurou
RyukurouAuthor

Romance tag is for when the romance will appear in the story. Anti-hero tag is there because although Nathan is a hero his motives and actions deviate from the normal definition of a hero.

Voidz_Zero:y is there romance and a aniti hero tag? Q and A right?
2yr
1
Eisheth
EishethLv15

Oh my goodness, thank the lords. I don't like harems. A guy should always stay loyal to one person, well in my opinion.

Ryukurou:No harem. Only one Fl.
2yr
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NObody
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So far it's nice to read because of the Writing Quality,StoryDevelopment, Stability of Update and mainly the charecter development of the Mc. At first i thought with the knowledge that Mc has of novel he won't have any difficulties surviving for the "time being" but hoo boy was I wrong , Anyways Those who are going to read the novel for the first time you are all in for a fun ride.

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Ash_Monarch
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First of all writing quality is extremely high and you can see that the author has a solid grasp on language. The mc is well written and the scenes with the other characters are enjoyable to read. I have currently read to the latest chap 22 and I highly recommend for you to give this one a chance

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zako4
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Reincarnation in a cliché novel written as a cliché novel. Characters are one dimensional and pretty bland. They have their one personality trait and it heavily defines them. Not a lot of smart characters. A lot of the chapters are rather skippable honestly. A lot of generic ideas, some portions were nice sections to read though. MC is your typical reincarnated reader/author with near photographic memory who faces "struggles" gathering OP items or rather are really just gifted to them.

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Indefinite hiatus 😂 Bro at least give a perfunctory explanation, just some details so we’d understand. I mean it’s your business going on a hiatus but this was really sudden

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AvgNovelReader
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man just too good gave tapov vibes and around ch 200 bro the story just gave me chills mann. do give it a try if u want 100% recommend it

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Eternal_Chair
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Reveal spoiler

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Matlock
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Hate transmigration stories where there are other who also transmigrated or have knowledge of it, and manipulate the MC, especially when the author hides that fact. Especially when they put that discovery well behind the pay wall. Scummy.

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Extra281
Extra281Lv15

I would give this novel 0 stars if I could. I just finished chapter 34 and it's clear this book plagiarized alot of ideas from the novel "The Authors POV" and a cool key idea/power for the MC that's in the novel "The Beginning After The End." If you like the first few chapters of this novel, stop wasting your time here and read the mentioned novels above

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