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the novel is so cliche. mc brain doesn't work. mc why should a porter help him, give him millions for his sister. it was good at first, then it became a cliche. mc 7 years of humiliation did not darken him. There is 1 more Naruto, say he has a sister In addition, the classic cliche is in a coma, suddenly mc talks to the heroine for him. The subject is very difficult. mc should be nautral evil, or even chaotic evil. If 7 years humiliation was not enough for him, 10 more years should be humiliated.
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timeawayfromstress:For 7 years mc had everything else except humiliation. His share of dungeons, physical abuse other than humiliation, psychological abuse. Should have been more for 7 years. Mc gets to the guild but his contract should have been like a slave contract, it depends on the amount of money he gave. Like mc He doesn't talk to a person himself, he sends someone like his assistant. You go and interact with more people then you'll understand, life is not that simple.
Why the woman helped him is literally explained. If you didn't read it, that's your own problem. And if you have read any books that didn't follow the same storyline of mc turning edgy because of humiliation, then you would know that 7 years of humiliation won't just turn everybody 'dark'. It depends on the MC's personality, surroundings, and other factors. How I see it? Your tastes are what's cliche here. And if you ask me - my MC's brain functions a lot better than yours, if you can't even read properly before leaving a senseless review. :)
It was explained that the woman helped him, but it's a cliche. Doesn't 7 years of humiliation make everyone dark:D Humiliation makes .... things like his sister's sudden illness cliche.teammates sacrifice themselves to save mc in the dungeon cliche.this world should have been darker.mc His brain doesn't work. Even his goals are absurd.
Cyclxne:Why the woman helped him is literally explained. If you didn't read it, that's your own problem. And if you have read any books that didn't follow the same storyline of mc turning edgy because of humiliation, then you would know that 7 years of humiliation won't just turn everybody 'dark'. It depends on the MC's personality, surroundings, and other factors. How I see it? Your tastes are what's cliche here. And if you ask me - my MC's brain functions a lot better than yours, if you can't even read properly before leaving a senseless review. :)
You can call everything cliche, when all the stories you read are copy and paste of one another. MC gets humiliated. MC turns dark and edgy. MC wants revenge. And as for the reason she's helping him, I can't see how that is cliche. Maybe if you talked to more people in real life and understood how the human mind works, you'd know that humiliation does not make everyone dark.
timeawayfromstress:It was explained that the woman helped him, but it's a cliche. Doesn't 7 years of humiliation make everyone dark:D Humiliation makes .... things like his sister's sudden illness cliche.teammates sacrifice themselves to save mc in the dungeon cliche.this world should have been darker.mc His brain doesn't work. Even his goals are absurd.
For 7 years mc had everything else except humiliation. His share of dungeons, physical abuse other than humiliation, psychological abuse. Should have been more for 7 years. Mc gets to the guild but his contract should have been like a slave contract, it depends on the amount of money he gave. Like mc He doesn't talk to a person himself, he sends someone like his assistant. You go and interact with more people then you'll understand, life is not that simple.
Cyclxne:You can call everything cliche, when all the stories you read are copy and paste of one another. MC gets humiliated. MC turns dark and edgy. MC wants revenge. And as for the reason she's helping him, I can't see how that is cliche. Maybe if you talked to more people in real life and understood how the human mind works, you'd know that humiliation does not make everyone dark.
You probably need a therapy session cause I don't know man, do you stay in your house throughout your life that you think life's like that? Besides if an adult decides to become evil or edgy because of humiliation in real life then that guy a child. You thinking real life is like all this fantasy stories is really something else by the way. Also please type properly or speak good English because it's difficult reading your comment.
timeawayfromstress:For 7 years mc had everything else except humiliation. His share of dungeons, physical abuse other than humiliation, psychological abuse. Should have been more for 7 years. Mc gets to the guild but his contract should have been like a slave contract, it depends on the amount of money he gave. Like mc He doesn't talk to a person himself, he sends someone like his assistant. You go and interact with more people then you'll understand, life is not that simple.
7 years. Not just a single humiliation, not just a bad day in modern society. The world in which the novel takes place can be said to be very pure, can you really say that you have read this novel, it makes sense. The world should have been darker. I mean there is no logic in the novel. The subject is very cliche. It's not just the lamentation for 7 years........the world over there seems to be in order very quickly. I don't stay at home all my life, I don't watch some news channels and don't follow the herd, I just find it ridiculous. You don't understand the human mind. I repeat, if you don't have power in 7 years you are in the world where you can die or exploit, you are playing with your life in dungeons, a wrong look can make you dead, you could not open your own system, you encounter curses and physical abuse everywhere, the life of a person at the bottom. You have to bow down to everyone for your brother who is in a coma. Do you start the day happy? mistakes and some sentences are wrong because of the translation. I mean mc can't live so simply in 7 years.
Anon22:You probably need a therapy session cause I don't know man, do you stay in your house throughout your life that you think life's like that? Besides if an adult decides to become evil or edgy because of humiliation in real life then that guy a child. You thinking real life is like all this fantasy stories is really something else by the way. Also please type properly or speak good English because it's difficult reading your comment.
You think with an adult mindset. Does the world of the novel make sense to you? How cheap is life when there are interests and people who can get stronger?
Anon22:You probably need a therapy session cause I don't know man, do you stay in your house throughout your life that you think life's like that? Besides if an adult decides to become evil or edgy because of humiliation in real life then that guy a child. You thinking real life is like all this fantasy stories is really something else by the way. Also please type properly or speak good English because it's difficult reading your comment.
timeawayfromstress:7 years. Not just a single humiliation, not just a bad day in modern society. The world in which the novel takes place can be said to be very pure, can you really say that you have read this novel, it makes sense. The world should have been darker. I mean there is no logic in the novel. The subject is very cliche. It's not just the lamentation for 7 years........the world over there seems to be in order very quickly. I don't stay at home all my life, I don't watch some news channels and don't follow the herd, I just find it ridiculous. You don't understand the human mind. I repeat, if you don't have power in 7 years you are in the world where you can die or exploit, you are playing with your life in dungeons, a wrong look can make you dead, you could not open your own system, you encounter curses and physical abuse everywhere, the life of a person at the bottom. You have to bow down to everyone for your brother who is in a coma. Do you start the day happy? mistakes and some sentences are wrong because of the translation. I mean mc can't live so simply in 7 years.