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sirangleLv22yr
2023-05-02 05:44

A rather well written novel. I kinda dislike all the perv bait in the book, but it can be ignored. You can, and should, skip all the NSFW chapters. The book is definitely going down the Harem route. The MC does not care about preserving the original timeline at all which results in significant changes from the games timelines. Join our combat loving main character as he founds a faction to take over Skyrim. The characters are well written. True to the game but with twists. LOTS of modded characters. So you WILL meet characters which are brand new.

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Lemon_Square
Lemon_SquareAuthor

Thanks for your honest opinion and thoughtful review! I know my more smutty chapters aren't to everyone's taste so I try to accommodate as many readers as possible without letting go of the core story I want to tell. I hope you keep reading and enjoying the non-smut chapters!

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It has its own charm compared to the popular novel going around. I enjoy the fact that it's modded Skyrim so MC may not know or remember everything but knows a good amount of stuff like how he exploits his knowledge in the very beginning. I think it's interesting that the MC is also an Orc The dialogue could be better at times, maybe not even that but the formatting, it feels like there are too many blocks of text/paragraphs where as you you'll see frequent line breaks in other popular novels which make it more pleasant to the eyes Events seem to pass fairly quickly, I like that and it's great to get the plot moving though I hope we have slower points in the future. I haven't read extremely far since I like to let things build up but it has been on my mind to keep reading this. I deal very poorly with suspense and when I feel a novel is good, I want to let it build up more before I get. very invested into it. The release schedule is fairly spaced which I don't blame the author for, everyone needs their own inspiration and writes at a different space. I personally cannot imagine writing a novel so I'm not going to be unreasonable but getting to the point of a daily release schedule if possible, would be amazing. Again, I don't know what author has going on in his life and this could just be a minor hobby. I hope this novel overtakes the other Dragonborn one, I think you could really make this into something special that stays at the top of the "all-time" if you keep at it Praise the lemon square

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