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Die_Jobb
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LIKEI haven't read it yet, I just wanted to be the first to comment. and from what you say it doesn't seem worth it
Gabichu_Yeah:My fellow reader, I only read up to chapter 4, have you read the rest of this story yet? I had to stop reading because I didn't understand anything. Is it worth reading on? Or are the chapters still meaningless puzzles?
Iury_27:I haven't read it yet, I just wanted to be the first to comment. and from what you say it doesn't seem worth it
I understand it's got the slow-burn-story syndrome, which I will not change (for this novel), but I believe that by ch.10 you will feel the speed gets higher, and by ch.15 the speed gets to where you'll wish it to be ... I've got an idea, of taking a mid-chapter content and creating a ch.0 from it, to let readers experience the story without needing to sink into it just to find out if it's up to their taste.... so thanks, I'll try doing it soon. The novel is in progress, new, and even I am afraid to comment 'what do I think of this novel' objectively, at least until there's a concrete point, which will probably arrive by the end of vol.2. btw, a question, is a certain mystery puzzled you, or rather the existence of mystery itself within the story? thanks for reading, commenting, and giving this novel a chance.
Gabichu_Yeah:My fellow reader, I only read up to chapter 4, have you read the rest of this story yet? I had to stop reading because I didn't understand anything. Is it worth reading on? Or are the chapters still meaningless puzzles?
I did not understand the last question but a possible answer if I like the mystery and the riddles is that you read my last commented book. It's one from DC, there the author put so much mystery and random things that I don't understand what I'm reading and many readers think the same from what I read in the comments Is "DC: Rose Of Death"
Die_Jobb:I understand it's got the slow-burn-story syndrome, which I will not change (for this novel), but I believe that by ch.10 you will feel the speed gets higher, and by ch.15 the speed gets to where you'll wish it to be ... I've got an idea, of taking a mid-chapter content and creating a ch.0 from it, to let readers experience the story without needing to sink into it just to find out if it's up to their taste.... so thanks, I'll try doing it soon. The novel is in progress, new, and even I am afraid to comment 'what do I think of this novel' objectively, at least until there's a concrete point, which will probably arrive by the end of vol.2. btw, a question, is a certain mystery puzzled you, or rather the existence of mystery itself within the story? thanks for reading, commenting, and giving this novel a chance.