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byovevald
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I don't know why that ff has lots of positive reviews, cause I see lots of mistakes and stupid MC, who couldn't hold his opinion and thoughts inside. Just a FULL fluff story and adorable (sarcasm) drama. MC character is good and supporting, but this is ninja world. 4/5 stars. Dialogs had good written. 5/5. Plot is disgusting. 1/5. Don't like needless OC's. 3/5. Totally : 13/4 = 3,25. 3.35/5 stars.

The Best Shinobi

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KasiCair
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I have to agree. It's bland. Nothing we haven't seen before in hundreds of other Naruto fanfics. There is nothing really bad about the story... but there is also nothing that would strike interest. At least for me. Admittedly, I didn't get that far in the story because of how dreadfully boring it was for me. Now, some people might say I don't have the right to judge if I didn't read it all but my point is simple. The story failed to keep my attention or even get my interest in the first few chapters. That's the basis of my opinion. Anyway, if you are a new reader, go on and try it out. You might like it. There really isn't anything bad with the story.

SonoBello
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What do you mean with "disgusting"?

Alef_Biersack
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Ah many things I don't like about the MC's personality and how no one ever questions how he knows so much that it's a plot hole, but I have to say the MC's development as a ninja goes down a pretty original path at the point I'm at story, the only other thing I don't like about the story is the exaggeration of Guy's exploits.

KasiCair:I have to agree. It's bland. Nothing we haven't seen before in hundreds of other Naruto fanfics. There is nothing really bad about the story... but there is also nothing that would strike interest. At least for me. Admittedly, I didn't get that far in the story because of how dreadfully boring it was for me. Now, some people might say I don't have the right to judge if I didn't read it all but my point is simple. The story failed to keep my attention or even get my interest in the first few chapters. That's the basis of my opinion. Anyway, if you are a new reader, go on and try it out. You might like it. There really isn't anything bad with the story.
Yardigan
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who's the love interest? and is this a single love interest story?

Hsaet_Uchiha
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I also want to review the same as you.

LukeMorningStar
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I need know too.

Yardigan:who's the love interest? and is this a single love interest story?