webnovel
_Anuar_Lv31yr
2023-07-17 07:08

have potential but character design and story development didnt work well but still real story plot is starting so I will read and change my review in future. .currently you are writing most chapter which is same as mahwa so please dont do it in future because it can make readers who have already readed manhwa bored.

Eleceed: The Law of the Strongest

WriterFan
4.5
170 Chs

Liked by 11 people

LIKE
Replies3
WriterFanAuthor

I will keep it in mind, thanks for your opinion.

1yr
1
illuzioLv1

You didn't keep that in mind

WriterFan:I will keep it in mind, thanks for your opinion.
1yr
5
The_Petty_KnightLv12

what happened 🤣🤣

illuzio:You didn't keep that in mind
11mth
1
Other Reviews
Anna_BananazLv12

nice eleceed fanfic. since there are only a few can't really complain to much. other than it being facepaced and bzztttt bzutttt it's a decent read. thanks author sama for making it

2yr
11
7

Youssra_HamilLv1

Hello my friend, try to make this character reach the top ten before starting the plot Hello my friend, try to make this character reach the top ten before starting the plot

2yr
10
iModexLv4

It's a good fanfic, it's unique since mc does what he want and he is the original mc's twin so that's a plus and being kayden's disciple is another plus but i Don't get it he supposed to have 200+ iq but he is just average when it comes to being smart he literally forgot to ask the assassins who wanted him dead and other stupid actions like missing up 2 associations at the same time and not expecting that the other guy will ambush him while he is fighting the other guy

2yr
9
1
silveron_sencioLv4

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
4
Midou_GivanciLv2

I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art,

2yr
3
Jorah26252Lv4

This is a terrible story, the mc went from a normal to someone that thinks he’s above everyone. And the author has a habbit of just pulling shi out their ah. Don’t really this if you want a good story, it’s a waste of time.

1yr
2
VastokingLv6

I like eleceed, this fanfic is decent, I have an issue with the Reed Richard iq when the mc keeps doing dumb stuff. Its also very inconsistent that is all I can say Iv read until chapter 10 and that is what I've noticed so far.

1yr
2
3
Conta2Lv1

Realmente uma boa história, parabéns eu gostei bastante e estou viciado Espero que você sacie meu vício com lançamentos constantes 😂 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB

2yr
2
ramon14680Lv14

Well, the overall story is fine. But I would work on how you write the fanfiction. For example: you are currently writing it like this Kayden: What kayden says (what happens for example he evades an explosion) But what I whould do is Kayden: “something that kayden says” and then say things that happen between just without the () and if he says something in the same paragraph just begin again with the”” I would also work on the sound effects that you use. There are a lot of BOOOMSS BZZZT etc. I think it would be more readable to minimalize the sound effects, and replace them with just text. For exaple you just write the number 98 fires an explosion at kayden and he evades to the right an immediatky tries to electocute him with an electric spear or someting like that. The last thing I would like to say is that I think it would nice if you can gice the characters names instead of Top 98. I understand that you want to keep some characters secret with the question marks but I don’t think it will be a problem to name the other characters. You can even use a random name generator or something. Well that was all I hope the advice is usefull.

2yr
2
1
Related Stories

Naruto: Sukuna's Jinchuriki, I am Uchiha

First of all, my last name is Uchiha. Hmm… and then there's a Sukuna sealed inside me. I've never once tried to reconcile with Sukuna; after confirming he couldn't break through the seal, I started to relentlessly exploit him. With the Mangekyo and Domain Expansion, a powerful bloodline ability like no other was born – Slash Release! Without a hint of hesitation, knowing his acting couldn't fool the Third Hokage and others, Kagami always showed his true Uchiha nature. He did not defect, nor would he let the clan be destroyed. The Uchiha clan will rebuild Konoha from its ruins! > "Not having seen Jujutsu Kaisen is fine; it only borrows character settings with some modifications. But if you haven't seen Naruto... well, that's a different story." ---------- Raw:宿傩人柱力，在下宇智波 ---------- Read up to 20 Chapters ahead on patreon.com/Fanglin [Please leave a 5 Star review and power stone for this novel] *Thank you*

Fanglin · Anime & Comics
4.7
138 Chs

I am Morty Sanchez

Inspired by "I am Morty but better." I took some of his chapters and decided to make my own. Credit to him. This is just fun fic and won't be too serious it won't follow the canon, so if you don't like it sue me. ========== Reborn as Morty Smith from Rick and Morty. He will travel through multiverse for a lifetime of adventure while wooing woman along the way. "Yes~ Morty~ Fuck your Mommy harder!" "Hey, don't hog him all to yourself, Mom." ======= BEFORE READING. Incest Time travel clone/Hivemind orgy. Y'all might think it's self-Ntr so if you think so then this fic isn't for you. Alien seggs. Female Yautja and humanoid Xenomorph. I mean it's rick and Morty. Semi-furry( Like fanart of Renamon and Tigress) Porn with plot. MC Chaotic Neutral to Neutral Good. Wish fulfilment. Jerry smith is Cucked. Massive Harem. Planned world: Adventure Time, Ben 10, Invincible, The Boys, Gravity Falls, Star Vs forces of evil, Frozen, Tangled, Kung Fu Panda, etc.

Try_hard · Anime & Comics
3.7
162 Chs

My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded

This book was inspired by My Hero Academia: Adaptation "Who decided being quirkless means you can't be a hero? Those are just rules made by people who never tried to break them." When a battle-hardened warrior dies in one world and awakens in the body of a quirkless boy in another, the rules of heroism are about to change. Armed with combat experience from a darker realm and an iron will forged in warfare, he sets his sights on U.A. High School - the pinnacle of hero education. But in a society where superpowers are everything, his approach to strength might just shatter the entire system. Behind a gentle smile lies the mind of a warrior. As he builds his power through unconventional means, one thing becomes clear: rules were meant to be broken, and this world's definition of "hero" is about to be rewritten. Sometimes the strongest ability isn't a quirk at all. It's the will to change everything.

WisteriaNovels · Anime & Comics
4.8
59 Chs

One Piece: With Sign-in System

Ron finds himself reborn in the world of One Piece, stranded on a remote island in the East Blue. But he's not just any ordinary child—he’s bonded to a mysterious sign-in system that grants him powers with every new location he visits. At his first sign-in, he unlocks the legendary Sun Breathing Technique, along with a boost to his vitality. From Shitmotsuki Village to Skypiea, Enies Lobby to Marineford, Ron travels the world, collecting extraordinary rewards that make him a force to be reckoned with. The Raikiri, one of the 21 Great Grade Swords, Armament Haki, Observation Haki, and more fall into his hands. As Ron steps onto the battlefield of Marineford during the legendary Summit War, the mightiest warriors—Four Emperors and Marine Admirals alike—pause, stunned by his presence. But Ron merely waves them off, "Don’t mind me. I’m just passing through." Join Ron on his journey across the Grand Line as he signs in at iconic locations, growing stronger with every step. This is not just an adventure—it’s a legend in the making. -------------- Access 40 chapters in advance on my Patreon: pat reon.com /ElvenKing20. Or Buy me a coffee: ko-fi. com/ elvenking20 -------------- This is a translation work; I do not own it.

ElvenKing20 · Anime & Comics
4.8
160 Chs

Pokemon: Gym Leader

"Champion Lance, it’s said that you challenged the Rota Gym yesterday, correct?" A reporter interviews the Champion Lance. "I refuse to answer," Lance replies tersely. "It's said that you battled the Rota Gym Leader with your full team and got completely swept. Is that true?" "I refuse to answer," Lance responds with a cold expression. "It's rumored that after your defeat, the Rota Gym Leader made you change your online name to 'Dodo' for half a month. Is that true?" "I refuse to answer," Lance, now called 'Dodo,' replies, clearly irritated. "What’s your opinion of the Rota Gym Leader?" "I thought having three Dragonites in my team made me invincible, but he had the nerve to set up a hail team on the spot and completely counter me with four Alolan Ninetales! What do I think? This is outrageous! Who let him become a Gym Leader?" ----- If you want to get an early access some chapters you can visit my patreon. Patreon: RockyRoad891

RockyRoad891 · Anime & Comics
4.6
226 Chs
Login