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Zetsway
ZetswayLv122yr
2022-07-25 05:41

I really like the story and, until now, most actions and scenarios have been fairly logical. The English is also pretty good (at least in my opinion). The only 'problem' I have is the weird decision to nerf humans, and by association, the MC in DxD. I mean, aren't humans the weakest already even without the 7 spell limit you put on them? While it's true that I haven't read the latest volumes of DxD, but is there any human mage that can take even Raiser? And I mean without Sacred Gear, only pure magic.

DxD: The forgotten mob character, Motohama

CallmeMISTER
4.8
43 Chs

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Gild_Rakingh
Gild_RakinghLv1

The story is pretty good, although the idea that the novel becomes Harem over time makes it a bit difficult for me to continue reading, I'm liking the story now.

2yr

shiro_43
shiro_43Lv11

it was interesting till like the second the 5th chapter after that it just went downhill. The mc is just annoyingly pathetic so far the plot just so random it just doesn't make any sense. Walking through the street with a bucket of water cause his finger is emitting flame and your telling me no one noticed. Then meeting a random mage cause pLoT.

2yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced the MC is so stupid and the plot is so forced

2yr
LuciferSatan_6666
LuciferSatan_6666Lv2

Motohama is a character who has alot of potential but is not really used much in canon. Humans are relegated to the sidelines for the most part in dxd

2yr
ViaSky
ViaSkyLv10

Very Good. Love the logical thinking in the story so far. [img=recommend]

2yr
CallmeMISTER
CallmeMISTERAuthor

Respecting tradition, I will be shameless and score myself with 5 stars. 😂 As for the fate of the story? I have a lot planned and hope to improve my writing skills over time. Another thing, I like to leave clues throughout the story that maybe only the most attentive will notice. That's it, and I left.

2yr
Lucifer_satan06
Lucifer_satan06Lv4

Really a great fic so far. Most of the dxd fics are one dimension, always going for devil's and such so it's refreshing to see a human centric fic(atleast so far). MC is logical and is facing some genuine problems so that's also a plus for me. Apart from that this has been written brilliantly and is a joy to read

2yr
LuciferSatan_6666
LuciferSatan_6666Lv2

I love side characters who become main characters it makes a story interesting to see growth in personality and power with time. Highschool dxd is a perfect setting for anyone to get powerful.

2yr
Ur_Mom_Gay
Ur_Mom_GayLv4

this is such a good story, a breath of fresh air on the DXD fanfic section. I just love how different it is from most of the DXD ffs on this site, instead of following the 'main story' like most DXD ffs does, here the MC have his own plot- that is separate yet still intertwined with the main plot that quite interesting on its own, and the fact that his personality is unique and funny made it so much better

2yr
Mark_Baitinger
Mark_BaitingerLv14

I like it. Well the dxd Motohama is kind of stupid, a pervert and looks ugly. Mhm, guys enjoy Motohama struggle without a system and overpowered cheats, well ( appraisal and perverted energy is not that overpowered ).

2yr
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