it was interesting till like the second the 5th chapter after that it just went downhill. The mc is just annoyingly pathetic so far the plot just so random it just doesn't make any sense. Walking through the street with a bucket of water cause his finger is emitting flame and your telling me no one noticed. Then meeting a random mage cause pLoT.
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When did I write that no one noticed him walking around with a bucket? What would you do to hide the flame then? He doesn't have enough mana to use illusion or anything to cover the flame. Although the situation was embarrassing, it was the only reasonable option the mc had to hide it. After all, it's much more common for him to carry a random object with himself than someone sees him on the streets with supernatural power. As for the mage plot, if you're going to use that analogy... All stories happen because of the plot. Issei met Raynara to die because of the plot... To then be reincarnated. Asia bumps into Issei because of Plot... All things in a story happen through Plot. Your criticism makes no sense.
I think the problem is more with the convenience then the plot of the meeting with the mage. If he had a line of communication with him before(in story, not something that he remembers after meeting the mage) then it would have been easier to accept. As for the bucket, that was dumb on so many levels...Sure, he got a small flame on top on his finger, why not make a similar spell with a water ball and cast it on the same finger, they would cancel each other out or become steam which is much easier to hide. And wasn't he weak? How is he lugging around a full(for his finger to reach in I presume it was full and at least a few liters so that the water wouldn't get boiling hot) bucket around?
CallmeMISTER:When did I write that no one noticed him walking around with a bucket? What would you do to hide the flame then? He doesn't have enough mana to use illusion or anything to cover the flame. Although the situation was embarrassing, it was the only reasonable option the mc had to hide it. After all, it's much more common for him to carry a random object with himself than someone sees him on the streets with supernatural power. As for the mage plot, if you're going to use that analogy... All stories happen because of the plot. Issei met Raynara to die because of the plot... To then be reincarnated. Asia bumps into Issei because of Plot... All things in a story happen through Plot. Your criticism makes no sense.
I think you should give it one more chance, i am on the newly updated chapters and they are pretty good. P.S - The whole mage thing was pretty stupid, i van agree with you on that
Zetsway:I think the problem is more with the convenience then the plot of the meeting with the mage. If he had a line of communication with him before(in story, not something that he remembers after meeting the mage) then it would have been easier to accept. As for the bucket, that was dumb on so many levels...Sure, he got a small flame on top on his finger, why not make a similar spell with a water ball and cast it on the same finger, they would cancel each other out or become steam which is much easier to hide. And wasn't he weak? How is he lugging around a full(for his finger to reach in I presume it was full and at least a few liters so that the water wouldn't get boiling hot) bucket around?
I never stopped, if you look, I even left a 5* review.
Daoist9177NN:I think you should give it one more chance, i am on the newly updated chapters and they are pretty good. P.S - The whole mage thing was pretty stupid, i van agree with you on that
Good for you.
Zetsway:I never stopped, if you look, I even left a 5* review.
man, comments like yours ruin a good story like this, the mc is an alpha male OP at the moment, he just needs to grow more, but he has the ability to kill an angel with 6 wings and has unimaginable powers
Comments like you ruin a story for new Readers more by just showing only the good side and making them waste their time if they don’t see the bad side and then end up wasting the time reading something they don’t like. I Did not read the Novel yet but I just commented to your fangirl thinking that makes many People waste their time.
Wachdog:man, comments like yours ruin a good story like this, the mc is an alpha male OP at the moment, he just needs to grow more, but he has the ability to kill an angel with 6 wings and has unimaginable powers
