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Hsaet_Uchiha
Hsaet_UchihaLv41yr
2023-11-05 12:29

Writing quality 3. - Not bad for casual readers. Story development 3.- The way this story was going is nice but The author nerf the clan. Making it irrigating. Character design 3. - I have no Idea how a 10 years old kid by defeating an great elder who should be a jonin or elite jonin makes him gain the Trust from every one. In my opinion Mc should be at most elite jonin level (with 20%). Updating stability 4. World background 1.- This is the most annoying part of this story. How much nerf did the author make the Uzumaki clan? And I am not even talking about Sealing jutsu. In the manga it said some of the world's nations banded together to destroy Uzushiogakure, believing the village was too powerful to be allowed to continue. Which means at least 2 countries. overall 2.8

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Natsu_Dragneel_6892
Natsu_Dragneel_6892Lv14

Did the clan still get destroyed then and if so by how many villages, I’m assuming it only took one based on what you said

Dr3am_wa1ker
Dr3am_wa1kerLv15

Mc prevented the destructionAuthor had only mist attack while lightning watchedThe war was straight trash tbh

Natsu_Dragneel_6892:Did the clan still get destroyed then and if so by how many villages, I’m assuming it only took one based on what you said
Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4

It took:kumo, iwa, kiri; to destroy uzushikagure.

Natsu_Dragneel_6892:Did the clan still get destroyed then and if so by how many villages, I’m assuming it only took one based on what you said
rimuru_sensei
rimuru_senseiLv1

Vos culiadonq te crees q sos para saber q es bueno. Y malo culiaos kk

Anitimesc
AnitimescLv14

Is there any romance ?

Anitimesc
AnitimescLv14

How many waifus will MC have ?

Anitimesc:Is there any romance ?
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