Natsu_Dragneel_6892

Your the definition of someone who doesn’t know how to take constructive criticism you should appreciate those of us who give constructive criticism rather just shit on your work and I don’t read NTR novels go fuck yourself

You need therapy or maybe your just a useless asshole with no bitches and no life, go fuck yourself you cock sucks bc rat bastard motherfucker. I bet your parents would disown you if they knew this is what you do making shitty comments on other people’s hard work you fucking retard

Author don’t pay attention to the useless pieces of shit in the comments who have no lives just deleted their stupid comments and keep writing

Are you retarded or just outright stupid nah never mind you’re both go fuck yourself you useless piece of shit. The only reason your here is probably because you’re useless because irl too

Other than the few mistakes in my opinion I’ve seen so far everything is pretty good. The one thing I will say is don’t rewrite an entire interaction from the other characters view like you did with the Jean Grey meeting if anything add their thought from time to time otherwise it will just slow down the story.

Oof but them thighs though 🤤🤤🤤

Sauce?

😍😍😘

Anthony said*

Bro why do authors do this like Anthony MC sparred some of them and then their going to plot against him just kill all of them to send a message and be done with it if anything author can just have MC go to space and continue his story with that