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timeawayfromstressLv12yr
2022-09-04 05:25

mc is doing well at first. It's like nautral evil. Then he plays the protagonist. mc's way of thinking always changes. The novel is not a logic novel. mc destroys the city in one chapter, the next chapter seems to help people. It is not a story of empowerment of mc, it is just a fun novel.

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Sorrest
SorrestAuthor

hence literally my own review. if you were expecting an evil mc through and through, read a novel about a villain.

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

What does it have to do with my review?

Sorrest:hence literally my own review. if you were expecting an evil mc through and through, read a novel about a villain.
Sorrest
SorrestAuthor

not just your review on my book, the reviews you leave on other books. you just seem to have a distain for mc's that are heroes. plus, having a negative review on my book is cause for concern obviously lol

timeawayfromstress:What does it have to do with my review?
Sorrest
SorrestAuthor

honestly, you just seem like you don't like books from everything you write. may be time to find a different hobby. maybe fishing?

timeawayfromstress:What does it have to do with my review?
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

Didn't you look at the reviews on my profile that I gave good episodes or 5 stars? Are you right about this or not about my review of your novel? I give bad novels 1 star. MCs with no brains, hypocrites, living thanks to plot armor. In your novel, the most hypocritical MC has.

Sorrest:not just your review on my book, the reviews you leave on other books. you just seem to have a distain for mc's that are heroes. plus, having a negative review on my book is cause for concern obviously lol
Sorrest
SorrestAuthor

how is she hypocritical?

timeawayfromstress:Didn't you look at the reviews on my profile that I gave good episodes or 5 stars? Are you right about this or not about my review of your novel? I give bad novels 1 star. MCs with no brains, hypocrites, living thanks to plot armor. In your novel, the most hypocritical MC has.
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

his actions do not match the previous one. I explained it in the previous comments. See previous comments

Sorrest:how is she hypocritical?
Sorrest
SorrestAuthor

her. bruh.

timeawayfromstress:his actions do not match the previous one. I explained it in the previous comments. See previous comments
Sir_Squirrle
Sir_SquirrleLv4

he said nothing about hating hero mcs though? he only said that the mc switches from being bad to good randomly, and that it ruins the story, an mc can't be both good and bad, it's either one of them or non at all

Sorrest:not just your review on my book, the reviews you leave on other books. you just seem to have a distain for mc's that are heroes. plus, having a negative review on my book is cause for concern obviously lol
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

I like how the author first thought is to go through someone's profile to look for dirt on said person. Really shows the mental age of the author and probably reflect in their writing.

Jbgang
JbgangLv4

Yea as the story went on the MC is either bragging or complaining lol. Doesn’t help that she complains about plot armor and yet so many instances she is literally a walking plot armor. Case in point when she is hunting titans she says wow they are the same power as me. Then a couple minutes later ends the fight no problem lol . Not saying it’s bad but this story is unserious as the original reviewer said it was lol

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