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Kinda mid. Description kinda made me think this will have like a psycho mc, but it's one of these where mc turns kinda good right after reincarnation. At least there is no romance. Revenge plot is kinda overused. And the vow he makes is cringe. Despite what I said, since webnovel is the garbage dump of novels, this can be considered above average.

As of currently he is my favorite author and his stories are pretty interesting and all vary. I have high hopes for this fanfic,as of now It’s chapter 3 and it’s starting out good but until further notice,I have nothing else to say😊

in one chapter he says that he will no longer kill innocent people, because they are also someone’s parents or husbands, but in chapter 14 he brutally kills three children (genin), this fanfic did not work for me because the author cannot be responsible for his own words

4/5 ⭐ Good Fanfic. To keep it short there's three problem imo: 1. Time line Such as age, 4th raikage age is far too old. And 3rd war is not supposed to be that close to 2nd war but author keep saying like it would happen anytime right now. 2. MC power is growing too fast He's already as strong as 5 kages when he still 11. That makes it feel like we're reading chinese fic. 3. Interaction between characters There's not much interaction between MC and other characters, and that makes their relation feels forced. That's all, and Thank you for your hard work author👏👏

No problems with writing, the story development is good as well on a broader perspective but the pacing is bad, this feels like if you drop this novel, you'll never think of picking it up again. The character design is meh, the MC is really bland compared to what's promised in the synopsis. The updates are slow. World Background is mostly asspulls. I get the original reference of MC's powers but the connection is just way too farfetched.

I have enjoyed this story a lot! Went into this not expecting much since authors tend to be one-hit wonders. But both of the stories that I have tried have been entertaining. Will probably be checking out the other ones next. This story is plot-heavy. It revolves a lot around a tragedy that happens somewhere in the story's timeline, and it keeps building on it in exciting and dramatic ways. The author doesn't shy away from epic scenes and dramatic reputation-building. And importantly I never stopped buying his actions or his group. I really liked seeing his organization being formed btw. A highlight of the story. Some bullet points. It isn't cringe. This isn't an edge lord story as the murderer start would imply. No harem. No romance yet either. Lots of action. Slow but gradual character growth. Also world travel. A lot of world travel. This point btw... This is a story for people interested in Naruto fanfics that break the mold of Konoha - academy - ninja - canon plot. So fair warning. Though for me it's a good thing. 10/10 would read again.

Hahaha what an original way so they don't ask you to get Doujutsu. How perfect that it has no room for eyes in the head. I'd like to see him fall in love with someone who lived a life of murder.