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RealmWriter
RealmWriterLv42yr
2022-12-17 01:09

REALLY hope this one gets picked, since it has major potential. Also I dunno if it's true that the translator skipped content but what ever! If you can't find the whole, deal with the cut and sliced half!

When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First

Elite Classroom
4.3
450 Chs

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Lovelynovels
LovelynovelsLv5

He did.. Actually its rewriten and skipped but to me its look better...

2yr
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RealmWriter
RealmWriterLv4

what's the OG name?

Lovelynovels:He did.. Actually its rewriten and skipped but to me its look better...
2yr
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Chan_Feng
Chan_FengLv14

I really dislike when translators do that stuff. That and when they try to westernize names and locations . Anyways, going to skip .

2yr
1
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Tellatale
TellataleLv5

Interesting synopsis, i think this's good novel if there's no harem ........................................................................................................................................

2yr

ra11y
ra11yLv14

女神还是小可怜，被我投资了！ Not a bad novel, will probably read it more online. Hope it gets picked!

2yr
Lone_Shadow13
Lone_Shadow13Lv13

Mtl link ?....,........................................,........................................,....................................... .

2yr
Layios
LayiosLv11

Honestly it suck, I've read 60ish raw chapter and can just say that author/MC is forcing too much on losing money that it downgrade all the good quality of it's story. I'm not against MC fully using it's system but I think the fact that he needs to "lose" money on his gf so that he can get x100 back is annoying. He doesn't seems to care much about her tbh, he "use" her as cash cow and she fell in love with his "kindness" as for him it's a pretty good deal 'cause she's beautiful, skillful, obedient and many more, anyway I don't rly feel any love from MC or it's not very well pronounced. Later he's just trying to make money (losing) and for that he needs to invest on his GF but her GF is so kind that she try to minimize the lose but he still try even though he gain money by doing business by investing on her. I'm honestly fed up by his greed or what's over. In the end it's a game of who can lose or minimize (and have profit) money. Anyway idea's all right, not very original but still could have been interesting but ended up bad with it's setting like it's system rebate or MC personality.

2yr
asaade
asaadeLv10

1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel

2yr
HumbleScholarSu
HumbleScholarSuLv12

This mfker removed a lot of parts from the raw, not cool at all, the raw novel is great, but this mfker removed those parts pity 5 stars for everything except the translate

2yr
kuro41
kuro41Lv3

raw name..........,..............................................................................................................................

2yr
Seamania
SeamaniaLv15

Another good novel ruined by trash translator again. If the translator didn’t edit many parts and tried to westernized with no knowledge, the story will be the most interesting one of this year. Please remove the translator, Webnovel. If you use this person again, more good work will be ruined by this person again and again.

1yr
Ok_Phonem
Ok_PhonemLv11

Goldman Sachs and Morgan Stanley aren't Investment Corporations... If you use real companies at least get it right. Not sure if author, or if translator westernized it and trolled

2yr
Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

rly hope that this will be picked love the mc so far he seems to be normal, which is way better than most braindead mcs nowadays it looks that this is going to be sweet romance between FL and mc what else would you want? go read this

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