Item: When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First
Rating: 1
Author: asaade

asaadeLv102yr

2022-12-16 15:43

1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel

When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First

Elite Classroom

4.4

450 Chs

Liked by 18 people

Replies27

AwfulAbsoluteSweetLv4

Is this a bot comment or is there any substance to what you’re saying? Can you provide clear-cut examples?

2yr

asaadeLv10

what's so hard to understand about that? if you read the raw you will know they deleted and changes a lot of things

AwfulAbsoluteSweet:Is this a bot comment or is there any substance to what you’re saying? Can you provide clear-cut examples?

2yr

VOID_Lv12

check out Rise of the Infinite Sovereign then

2yr

RebelKidLv14

Then what’ the raw?

asaade:what's so hard to understand about that? if you read the raw you will know they deleted and changes a lot of things

2yr

asaadeLv10

go find it yourself

RebelKid:Then what’ the raw?

2yr

DomnLv13

You are the most useless reviewer ever

asaade:go find it yourself

2yr

asaadeLv10

you are the most useless person ever

Domn:You are the most useless reviewer ever

2yr

asaadeLv10

the goddess is still poor,she was invested by me just search it on faloo

2yr

asaadeLv10

女神还是小可怜，被我投资了！

2yr

RebelKidLv14

Okay.

asaade:go find it yourself

2yr

asaadeLv10

and your point is? if you really dont read mtl so why are you commenting then or you someone who lacks a friend so you are here begging others for attention?

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2yr

shiroyuki4baLv4

this is not the same novel. there are no raws online

asaade:女神还是小可怜，被我投资了！

2yr

asaadeLv10

its on faloo

shiroyuki4ba:this is not the same novel. there are no raws online

2yr

shiroyuki4baLv4

the synopsis is similar but the contents seem different. even the names of the protagonists are different

asaade:its on faloo

2yr

asaadeLv10

the translator remove and change quite a lot of things

shiroyuki4ba:the synopsis is similar but the contents seem different. even the names of the protagonists are different

2yr

shiroyuki4baLv4

I think they are probably different stories though.

asaade:the translator remove and change quite a lot of things

2yr

asaadeLv10

its actually the same they just edited most of it though so they cant be called to court for plagiarism, read about where the MC give the song to the FMC it was much more detailed in the raw and you will notice how the director found them unlike in the webnovel where the director directly appeared like they were already in there when the MC give the song

shiroyuki4ba:I think they are probably different stories though.

2yr

shiroyuki4baLv4

I see. wow. so you mean the raws were actually edited? but why edit the translated version?

asaade:its actually the same they just edited most of it though so they cant be called to court for plagiarism, read about where the MC give the song to the FMC it was much more detailed in the raw and you will notice how the director found them unlike in the webnovel where the director directly appeared like they were already in there when the MC give the song

2yr

asaadeLv10

go find a coin and try to find a brain

shiroyuki4ba:I see. wow. so you mean the raws were actually edited? but why edit the translated version?

2yr

Dman_1234Lv3

because faloo official translation should be on fantasy world online, not webnovel

shiroyuki4ba:I see. wow. so you mean the raws were actually edited? but why edit the translated version?

2yr

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