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2024-04-30 04:53

Badly in need of a rewrite. It is wholly unrecommendable as it is, with the author randomly (repeatedly, nonstop) forgetting what they had previously written from one chapter to the next, wildly changing pace and track on the fly as well as abruptly dropping reader-liked ideas for whatever shiny bauble pops up in their head. Every ten chapters are their own entity, the only connection being the main character. The author has little (if put nicely) zero (realistically) understanding of the original work and its characters, let alone any additional elements from other works (it's awful). Trying to read this fanfic makes you feel like a bipolar schizophrenic out of touch with your own mind. Look elsewhere for entertainment.

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