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Keith_Potato
Keith_PotatoLv112yr
2022-07-29 18:00

Danmachi but with mc with haki!!?? blind mc but kinda strong like fujitora from one piece!? Female Bell!? no wayyy! This one is good is a good danmachi fanfic, i read some other danmachi fanfic here in webnovel and this one have the most potential to become the best danmachi fanfic here in webnovel , the pace is kinda good maybe the characters lacks some communication but hey the author is a new writer and it seems he's improving in his past chapter in patreon, i suggest your read this there's nothing going to lost to you, it's worth it. that's it potato out :>

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Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4

Sauce?

NeroUmu
NeroUmuLv10

I think that is Azur Lane. Not 100% on that tho

Jama1810:Sauce?
H75_N
H75_NLv4

spoiler !!!

BrazillianFox
BrazillianFoxLv4

Taihou from Azur Lane? I see you are a man of culture.

Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4

You lost me at female bell

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Unfortunately the MC is not as strong as Fujitora, so far the MC has +70% of the staff and it honestly seems that the author forgets about Fujitora's strength and writes what he sees fit, I would give you the reason for the good review 6 months ago but today the fanfic is a bad joke

MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

gender bend is disgusting. Good thing for the comments

Dima_Gubanov
Dima_GubanovLv1

Do you love Yuri as much as I do? If yes, are there any interesting fan fiction about Yuri?

MarinXGrayfia:gender bend is disgusting. Good thing for the comments
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

this review is bunch of lies and nonsense

DaoistxsblgQ
DaoistxsblgQLv1

Не согласен слишком вырви глаз то насколько автор унизил и занизил Фудзитору персонаж который мог буквально швыряться метеоритами, владел Хаки наблюдения на уровне что мог смотреть в космос откуда он м притягивал метеориты, являлся сильным пользователем воли Вооружения вроде развил до внутреннего разрушения,являлся Великим Фехтовальщиком, учитывая что ВанПис буквально доминирует телосложение чудовищное а гг с 75% сил Фудзиторы ебанное днище. Извиняюсь за маты.

DaoistxsblgQ
DaoistxsblgQLv1

Извиняюсь зачем автор настолько позорин шаблоны персонажей Фудзитора адмирал Великий фехтовальших пользователь продвинутой воли наблюдения метеориты с космоса таскать, пользователь воли вооружения, пользователь гравитационного фрукта а по показанному днище полнейшее, автор если не хочешь делать Гг имбой то не давай такие шаблоны или не давай так быстро получить их полную силу, реально отвращение вызывает то как отвратительно передаётся сила шаблонов персонажей, но этого было мало так теперь замахнулись на верс блича, даже самый захудалый капитан это монстр что духовным давление раздавит авантюристов, причём даже богам в данмаяи даже захудалый капитан даст бой, учитывая что асаучи режет саму душу у авантюристов нету шансов ату богов их мало, пожалуйста не надо так обсирать другим версы ставя верс Данмачи в положение сильнейшего, верс Данмачи на самом деле довольно слабый верс по сравнению с ВанПис и Блич.

Martin_Den_Katte
Martin_Den_KatteLv14

This right here made me finna read this

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