IndolentFish

Only the first two chapters are passable. The writing style and spelling get both suddenly & progressively worse for many chapters, with many nonsensical words randomly inserted into paragraphs, then sentences with increasing frequency. After a dozen-ish chapters, the grammatical errors begin to clear up in favor of increasingly numerous and unnecessary asterisks. All the characters' personalities are wrecked in this fan fiction. One dimensional bums, murder hobos, thugs, henchmen, and star-struck wenches through and through.

Omni Man