Dima_Gubanov

Thanks to the author for mentioning the black dolphin prison, for reference, people are imprisoned in the black dolphin for life, there are rapists from murderers and there is one cannibal

You screwed up again! Can you stop blocking your spam and shame?

Again, it is unclear what Alain got from this confrontation , only fragments of Rebecca and 2b 's actions were received , that's all we got ! The author admit that. You screwed up and the fanfiction went to the bottom

No

It's a pity you can't get a sadistic dislike

The fanfiction was fascinating and good until the author started doing shit in the last chapters, he should be an imboy instead of a glass cannon, constantly suffers and there are no really good moments, stupidly romance 0 sex or 18 + so one star until the sadistic author corrects normally

And now I no longer trust the author, because he showed what a complete sadist he is, because gg constantly suffers and benefits 0 , instead of imbo gg he is like a glass cannon that's all, for this the author needs to put 1 star and dislikes

If the author dies , are you a complete sadist? Are you enjoying Alan's suffering? To create an invincible being , you either fix it or wish you death

At first everything was fine, a good gg , educated, strong, but then the author decided that gg should become Emma Frost's bitch and six, he dropped to 0 until 1 star until the author makes a normal narration

Why make a fish a call? Was it possible to summon a Mermaid? Which can scout in the water + water jutsu and turn into a completely human and espionage on the type of a simple civilian girl and 3 into an ordinary fish, there are a lot of variations