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Amataratsul
AmataratsulLv152yr
2023-01-25 03:43

I feel like the story is a tad slow and doesn’t embrace the onepiece power system fully, which is honestly a shame as it is difficult to tell of how strong a character is.

Pi-Gar-Chu (One Piece Fanfic)

dancematdan
4.5
145 Chs

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dancematdan
dancematdanAuthor

I understand your concerns and I will try to address them. It is more difficult to measure the powerscaling in the OP world and even more so when on Zou. Once she is exposed to the outside world, there should be a more accurate way to discern those things.

2yr
Amataratsul
AmataratsulLv15

Cheers other than unclear growth the story is a good quality book

dancematdan:I understand your concerns and I will try to address them. It is more difficult to measure the powerscaling in the OP world and even more so when on Zou. Once she is exposed to the outside world, there should be a more accurate way to discern those things.
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Shameless self review.. but here is just the authors words to those reading as I am asking for your patience and understanding. As you may or not be aware, this is just a side project of many side projects that I have ongoing at present. After writing the first draft, it will be uploaded in an unedited state in order to save time to write my other chapters for other books. The quality may be slightly lower and there may be the occasional mistake so I ask those that are more critical of mistakes and grammar to please be patient and give it a chance before judging so soon. If you have read any of my other novels then you should be already aware of my writing style and quirks as I tend to go into detail and hyper focus on certain points too much so I will apologise for that in advance? I have an original novel that I have to start up again soon, a fanfic that has eight releases of chapters per week, another fanfic that has two releases a week and then this project too that has three to four a week so I do not have time for proofreading and editing my works before uploading them. If I do so then the releases will become much less as most of my time will be spent on correcting mistakes, it is a question of what the audience would prefer in the end.. would they prefer high quality with one or two chapters that are released late or not at all each week.. or would you prefer a regular upload schedule to be kept while ocasionally spotting a minor error?

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