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lstreader
lstreaderLv142yr
2022-08-16 12:07

I really love the idea and so far it’s been good. Writing quality certainly isn’t the best but it’s not bad. The biggest complaint so far for me is the lack of interactions, the main character hasn’t done much other than hide and hunt different creatures which makes the story a little boring and repetitive. To the author, you are going to need to get a plot other than hunting creatures or else this won’t progress well.

Predator of Star Wars: Hunt(old)

GoldDragonMachina
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103 Chs

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GoldDragonMachina
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You are right. I have delayed on interaction. Now that Bido has a base, he will be interacting with mortal sentient beings soon.

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Ethereal062
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Really glad to finally have a relly yautja story. Theres almost none on this site and the little they have the mc’s r all pu**ys. But this is a badas* mc from what I see so far and hope to get more chapters.

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wiz161
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A story that you can really get into I would suggest est it to anyone who likes the star wars universe and it's lore with the interesting moral compass of the predators

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SomethingMalefic
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love it and am just waiting for more chapters. it is unique and thr characters have development and personality, even the characters he only meets once. overall one of, if not the best fanfics I've read on webnovel. keep it up author.

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Brezer
BrezerLv14

so he was transmigrated in a wormhole to star wars... transmigrated means he took over a body in the star wars universe IE some dies or something.... the are no predators in the star wars universe so how did he "transmigrate" into one... just say he was trans ported through the worm hole. 🪱 not going to read it because you put a predator in the sw universe and makes no sense but I thought I woukd help you clear the description up since it makes no sense. just going to star it off the introduction which doesn't make expect much fro. the story itself.

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ryan_biggins
ryan_bigginsLv15

This is one of the most interestin fanfics I read about Star Wars. I’m really loving it. it is an absolute masterpiece. I guarantee if your try it you’l enjoy it as long as you like Star Wars and have watched the alien/predator movies. Only complaints I have is the updating time is a little slow. Looks to be about one every week. And the lemon scenes could use more detail, I mean I am a man of culture.

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mark_scott
mark_scottLv13

this is one of the best predator and star wars story's I've read

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desolate_gamer
desolate_gamerLv15

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!! Such a great story and respect to lore for both universes. Please keep updating even if only once a week, was so looking forward to the next chapter and then it suddenly stopped was so worried. Keep up the good work.

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jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

GoldDragonMachina A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Raquette after meeting a God gets put into the Star Wars Galaxy after he dies from being struck by lightning in his previous world. Can he build up his Sovereign in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he succumb to the pressure . Home Base Planet: Nar Shadaa Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Tiplee Tiplar Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Queen Julia Luminara Unduli Aayla Secura Ahsoka Barriss Offee

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THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

amazing novel my only issue is with how short each chapter is and the frequency of release of said small chapters. I'll save up 5-6 chapters and finish within 10 minutes.

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