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Kallula
KallulaLv22yr
2022-07-14 22:20

I'm glad I found this book through recommendation from a friend of mine. I hate to admit but I finished the whole 30 chapters in a day since I have nothing else to do. The story is just perfect and I love the MC because he does what he wants since it's in his own novel and I would do the same if I live in a world I created. So far, I love everything in the story and not to mention the daily updates! I'm rating this book 5/5

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Honest reviews are here.. Hmmm... It is really hard to say if it is good or bad because I LOVE OP MC, but the problem is, the author nerf the MC.. As you read the synopsis, the MC is transmigrated into his own novel.. MC creates the plot, the drama, the character for each one, including the God in his novel world, but unfortunately, MC is weaker than the God that he created in his own novel.. MC is OP compared to other humans, but he almost dies fighting with one God.. Well, it is understandable that the author nerf MC.. The author can make MC seem more OP by not making him fight against God, but the author still does it to make MC seem weak.. MC also pretends to be nice, but actually, he harbours deep hate toward his own novel Protagonist, which becomes his rival instead of his allies.. MC also becomes a coward when he learns from the prophecy that his novel Protagonist will kill him even though he is a lot stronger than his novel Protagonist.. MC is Lv100 (max level), and all other top character are like around Lv20, and MC doesn't seem as OP as we imagine if we compare their level.. MC seems strong due to his max level, not due to his skill.. MC strongest skill and his 2nd strongest skill also come from the strongest God, which also threatens MC to not go overboard that will disturb the balance of the world.. The author gave the MC power, but he also limited MC action.. So, this is why I said it hard to judge if this novel is good or bad because the author wants to make OP MC novel, but the author also nerf the MC a lot of time which kinda pointless if make OP MC and at the same time, the author nerf MC.. It is like cancelling each other.. Or maybe the author tries to attract a reader who loves OP MC, and at the same time, he wants to attract readers who like weak to strong MC..

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