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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv52yr
2022-11-25 06:41

Overall a good noveL, BUT i'm not here to talk about the good things, i'm here to talk about the 2 big bad things: First of all, MARA. Yes, Mara, every single chapter and I MEAN EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER that she appears = a bad chapter, she is literally a walking 'forced plot'. 2: some W/W betwen the demon girls and mc girls (not a fan of that) P:S: Please just erase Mara or something similar

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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

F/F*

Absolute_Qlipoth
Absolute_QlipothLv4

True I hope author erase Mara's existence

uWu_69
uWu_69Lv4

there is yuri???

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

uWu_69:there is yuri???
uWu_69
uWu_69Lv4

what is with this one time, so it's okay? that's not,

PsyLoRD:
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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

i made a whole review about not being okay. i just wanted to let you know

uWu_69:what is with this one time, so it's okay? that's not,
ewtqet_wyhwsy
ewtqet_wyhwsyLv1

Thanx for warning i dont like Yuri

PsyLoRD:
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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

no problem, i don't like it either, the good news is: author suffered a lot of backlash from that scene (so he never did again). its a one time thing.

ewtqet_wyhwsy:Thanx for warning i dont like Yuri
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv5

Hey I stopped reading it after 70 CHP, so is it worth reading. I mean did it get boring after that or not?

PsyLoRD:no problem, i don't like it either, the good news is: author suffered a lot of backlash from that scene (so he never did again). its a one time thing.
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

worth

YourDad_:Hey I stopped reading it after 70 CHP, so is it worth reading. I mean did it get boring after that or not?
Earens
EarensLv3

which chapter is the yuri?

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

I don't remember... it's been a long time. I remember it was only 1 time.

Earens:which chapter is the yuri?
Earens
EarensLv3

can you guess around which hundred it was?

PsyLoRD:I don't remember... it's been a long time. I remember it was only 1 time.
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

took me some time but the chapter is 'Chapter 132:chapter131: resisting'

Earens:can you guess around which hundred it was?
Earens
EarensLv3

oh great really thank you man

PsyLoRD:took me some time but the chapter is 'Chapter 132:chapter131: resisting'
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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. Hmmm... It is really hard to say if it is good or bad because I LOVE OP MC, but the problem is, the author nerf the MC.. As you read the synopsis, the MC is transmigrated into his own novel.. MC creates the plot, the drama, the character for each one, including the God in his novel world, but unfortunately, MC is weaker than the God that he created in his own novel.. MC is OP compared to other humans, but he almost dies fighting with one God.. Well, it is understandable that the author nerf MC.. The author can make MC seem more OP by not making him fight against God, but the author still does it to make MC seem weak.. MC also pretends to be nice, but actually, he harbours deep hate toward his own novel Protagonist, which becomes his rival instead of his allies.. MC also becomes a coward when he learns from the prophecy that his novel Protagonist will kill him even though he is a lot stronger than his novel Protagonist.. MC is Lv100 (max level), and all other top character are like around Lv20, and MC doesn't seem as OP as we imagine if we compare their level.. MC seems strong due to his max level, not due to his skill.. MC strongest skill and his 2nd strongest skill also come from the strongest God, which also threatens MC to not go overboard that will disturb the balance of the world.. The author gave the MC power, but he also limited MC action.. So, this is why I said it hard to judge if this novel is good or bad because the author wants to make OP MC novel, but the author also nerf the MC a lot of time which kinda pointless if make OP MC and at the same time, the author nerf MC.. It is like cancelling each other.. Or maybe the author tries to attract a reader who loves OP MC, and at the same time, he wants to attract readers who like weak to strong MC..

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