This is much better than your first one, that's for sure. Improvement can be seen here, or were you just lazy on writing the Caleb ff you made first? Anyways, good pokemon ff, good job with this. Keep it up and don't drop either of your work it is one of the best
AiLund
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LIKEAiLund:thank you so much for the review!! I appreciate it, anyway I do my work in writing pretty seriously I think it is just an improvement