HentaiNoJutsu

yeah... try watching the anime, you'll know how gaara's mother was

gotta say it is an average ff, love seeing Axew as a starter. but, meh not really a fan of this anymore the likes where starter is too good. Axew egg can't be scanned with a center's database? now that's just bull. explain this then, how could a professional breeder not know of a pokemon egg? when they studied that career? surely, any one of the workers there would know? Pokemons are everywhere, and the species are numbered lol, it's not like Pokemons are varied like every egg are too. anyways, good luck with this one, I may change this review if there's no bullcrap happening without any valid reason. keep it up lol.

This is much better than your first one, that's for sure. Improvement can be seen here, or were you just lazy on writing the Caleb ff you made first? Anyways, good pokemon ff, good job with this. Keep it up and don't drop either of your work it is one of the best