Very satisfying to read. There's action and dialogue, and a timeframe to what is happening. From the introduction of Reapers to our current chapters. There are practically no grammatical errors, and everything makes sense, so that's already a huge bonus for a story on this website. The stability so far has seemed well-paced, and the story development is also well-paced. It's not too short and not too long, and still places emphasis on important parts of the story. Can't say much for character design, but I can say that the people feel like 'people', and not completely emotionless characters used to fill a few sentences. And the world background is also good. Everything is contained in the story, and nothing is just tossed at you for you to try and understand. TL;DR: Great story. Keep up the good work!
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before I read, can you let me know, is the MC a Human, an alien or a reaper synth? and what sort of direction the story takes, is it a save the galaxy, take over the galaxy or an attempt at co-existence in the galaxy? and lastly is there any romance
None of the above, but also all of the above. This story covers multiple characters, from humans to humans to reapers. But it is more focused on the reapers having an attempt at co-existence with humans. And so far I haven't seen much Romance.
thanks, not fond of multiple protag stories, so this isn't for me
