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A9B
A9BLv42yr
2022-07-31 06:25

unfortunately i had to rewrite my review. i was really looking forward to this book but the author decided that he want one love interest. i know that this is not something to cry about, but for me a villain mc with no moral should and can have whatever he want. why limit him? and this story is a multiverse travel so........ and the dude have super brain so yeah...... anyway the book is good but not for me. hence the 3*

Conquering The Omni-Verse!

KingSeyer
4.6
173 Chs

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Valfren
ValfrenLv4

yes exactly my same problems With the book . I noticed that your in dark wolf shiro cult i am your junior ^_^

2yr
7
A9B
A9BLv4

its a guild rookie mistake xD

Valfren: yes exactly my same problems With the book . I noticed that your in dark wolf shiro cult i am your junior ^_^
2yr
3
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

So what you're saying is this novel got 1000x better, thanks I'm reading it! Glad the author was actually sane

2yr
19
JustLoveToRead08
JustLoveToRead08Lv4

Point of harem that MC has emotional connection to all of love interests i.e. Shiro, but not pointless s*x with all of them. What you describe is ecchi. And it's not like having relationship prevents him from sleeping or r*ping every female character. And villain doesn't equal to harem, as we all know thanks to this app, it's reverse most of the time and it's hero equals to harem.

2yr
6
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Yes

2yr
1
Astarotic
AstaroticLv3

I am immensely glad that there is no harem in this book. +1000 author respect. Harem for losers.

2yr
6
A9B
A9BLv4

Everyone has their own taste and preference. no need for rude comments dude! anyway, good for you to find something you like and entertain you.

Astarotic:I am immensely glad that there is no harem in this book. +1000 author respect. Harem for losers.
2yr
26
Astarotic
AstaroticLv3

I agree, everyone has different tastes. Some have good taste (like me) and some have bad taste (like you). There's nothing to be done about it. That is life. I hope you enjoy reading sloppy harem stories too.

A9B:Everyone has their own taste and preference. no need for rude comments dude! anyway, good for you to find something you like and entertain you.
2yr
15
Lol_2050
Lol_2050Lv14

Astarotic:I agree, everyone has different tastes. Some have good taste (like me) and some have bad taste (like you). There's nothing to be done about it. That is life. I hope you enjoy reading sloppy harem stories too.
2yr
7
bananaman
bananamanLv3

uhhh it is an open relationship

2yr
SomethingMalefic
SomethingMaleficLv2

change ur review. he has more than 1.

2yr
Potatowned
PotatownedLv14

Gross.

SomethingMalefic:change ur review. he has more than 1.
1yr
Auspicious_69
Auspicious_69Lv3

thank you for warning me

1yr
1
k_ziggy
k_ziggyLv4

oh you really did something there🥱 i just can't figure out what it was🤔

Astarotic:I agree, everyone has different tastes. Some have good taste (like me) and some have bad taste (like you). There's nothing to be done about it. That is life. I hope you enjoy reading sloppy harem stories too.
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Abyssal_CrabGOD
Abyssal_CrabGODLv12

I won't complain about him being a villain but no mind control rape/rape in general. love to see more fanfics of the boys they need their own tag already

2yr

Taoist_Ouroboros
Taoist_OuroborosLv12

i don't mind him being a proper evil person who does some horrible stuff but doesn't turn him into a man child like homelander let him be intelligent and independent so he can be free of the company if he chooses but stays due to the benefits and them covering him without him needing to say so. i don't mind if his arrogant when he enters the omniverse but when he realises he isn't on top of the food chain let him be sensible about it and plan ahead

2yr
JustLoveToRead08
JustLoveToRead08Lv4

There is very thin line between charismatic villain and sc*m. Severus Snape vs Dolores Umbridge or Sandor Clegane vs Joffrey Waters and it's difference lies in character arc and development. And MC is strongly in latter camp. I think Author tried to make him Homelander (tv version) without all crippling psychological issues but what came out is just plain sc*m. I read up to 27th chapter and maybe Author plans some character arc but it does not seems likely.

2yr
Valfren
ValfrenLv4

GooD writing quality great potential . sadly no harem and it will make the story alot more interesting looking at how the mc gona bul it and how is he going to manipulate hes way in. non the less good read just not my cup of tea.

2yr
ViaSky
ViaSkyLv10

Yes. [img=recommend]

2yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I just write pros and Cons of this work. But divide it by the worlds. Because author does improve some things. And make a new mistakes. The boys. + mc is actually a villain! +some ideas are pretty great. - everything is so forced. You can predict how the story goes very easily. Like the first time mc mentioned Victoria, he already give away ending. - Mc just wastes his time and his plans doesn't work. -60 + chapters of useless fillers, out of 74 chapters in a first volume. Literally you could delete them, nothing gonna change. - romance done so poorly that people asked in comments, does mc actually loves Victoria at the end. That's just mental, dude. +cool powers. Can't do anything, they are just cool. The invincible world. + it's feels more natural and less forced. + at least mc plans starts to work. +the world much more interesting then boys. +romance become better*. Somewhat. At least it's doesn't feel like you chocking on a big NOSE in you troat. - Mc still love to waste time. -Mc isn't acting as a villain. In first volume we got at least some scenes where mc been evil, now there is nothing. A villain tag is why im here, and it's doesn't work... Great. * mc doesn't want to waste time on queen maeeve, but somehow amazonia us different....you don't see a problem here? So yeah. Can't say much good about it... But author really does improve in a second volume. So that's something.

2yr
Not_a_mango
Not_a_mangoLv4

The MC is evil just for the sake of evil. Some very disturbing things which doesn't donate much to the story/plot or any characters. It's like those emo period of kids. Honestly this is just straight up trash where a psychopath does whatever he wishes in the world he created. This is singular fan's fic. Don't know if it is a fanfic anymore tbh.

2yr
Victor_Garcia_1999
Victor_Garcia_1999Lv13

Finally a decent the boys fanfic. Excited to see where this is going

2yr
neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

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1yr
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