I won't complain about him being a villain but no mind control rape/rape in general. love to see more fanfics of the boys they need their own tag already

i don't mind him being a proper evil person who does some horrible stuff but doesn't turn him into a man child like homelander let him be intelligent and independent so he can be free of the company if he chooses but stays due to the benefits and them covering him without him needing to say so. i don't mind if his arrogant when he enters the omniverse but when he realises he isn't on top of the food chain let him be sensible about it and plan ahead

unfortunately i had to rewrite my review. i was really looking forward to this book but the author decided that he want one love interest. i know that this is not something to cry about, but for me a villain mc with no moral should and can have whatever he want. why limit him? and this story is a multiverse travel so........ and the dude have super brain so yeah...... anyway the book is good but not for me. hence the 3*

There is very thin line between charismatic villain and sc*m. Severus Snape vs Dolores Umbridge or Sandor Clegane vs Joffrey Waters and it's difference lies in character arc and development. And MC is strongly in latter camp. I think Author tried to make him Homelander (tv version) without all crippling psychological issues but what came out is just plain sc*m. I read up to 27th chapter and maybe Author plans some character arc but it does not seems likely.

GooD writing quality great potential . sadly no harem and it will make the story alot more interesting looking at how the mc gona bul it and how is he going to manipulate hes way in. non the less good read just not my cup of tea.

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I just write pros and Cons of this work. But divide it by the worlds. Because author does improve some things. And make a new mistakes. The boys. + mc is actually a villain! +some ideas are pretty great. - everything is so forced. You can predict how the story goes very easily. Like the first time mc mentioned Victoria, he already give away ending. - Mc just wastes his time and his plans doesn't work. -60 + chapters of useless fillers, out of 74 chapters in a first volume. Literally you could delete them, nothing gonna change. - romance done so poorly that people asked in comments, does mc actually loves Victoria at the end. That's just mental, dude. +cool powers. Can't do anything, they are just cool. The invincible world. + it's feels more natural and less forced. + at least mc plans starts to work. +the world much more interesting then boys. +romance become better*. Somewhat. At least it's doesn't feel like you chocking on a big NOSE in you troat. - Mc still love to waste time. -Mc isn't acting as a villain. In first volume we got at least some scenes where mc been evil, now there is nothing. A villain tag is why im here, and it's doesn't work... Great. * mc doesn't want to waste time on queen maeeve, but somehow amazonia us different....you don't see a problem here? So yeah. Can't say much good about it... But author really does improve in a second volume. So that's something.

The MC is evil just for the sake of evil. Some very disturbing things which doesn't donate much to the story/plot or any characters. It's like those emo period of kids. Honestly this is just straight up trash where a psychopath does whatever he wishes in the world he created. This is singular fan's fic. Don't know if it is a fanfic anymore tbh.

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