heyyy author, well i got hooked by your first chap i am not usually into systems but yeah this one really took me by surprise. i think that this novel has a great potential and with more work and focus i guess it will top up among the others

Although the idea of system and everyone getting them suddenly isn't something totally new as seen with a book I don't remember name of but everyone get system as gift on Christmas. But the thing about this book is writer had taken quite a unique take on it with territories and coins, the story have a nice flow and Bing readable waiting for more chapter to came so I can Bing read in a go

the storyline is improving each and every single day. The persona design, the plot, and the narration, the entirety is going smoothly and steadily. The quality is getting better too. The storyline has full potential to hook up it's readers. I surely suggest the readers to give it a chance, it will never gonna disappoint you. 💙

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The plot of the story seems new and interesting about how suddenly monsters appear, although only one chapter is out but character is portrayed nicely. The fighting scenes were written skillfully. I'm eager to know what will happen in the future and how the protagonist changes in these times.please update frequently as this story have potential.

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Instantly hooked amd already loved it- I read a few chapters an im definitely saving it to my library to read for later.

For a first work, this is a start. I would suggest using paragraphs, rather than going sentence by sentence. Next, your descriptions could use some work. While they do get the image you want across, the reader has to make mental leaps to figure what's happened. The word choice could be a lot better in some areas, and the dialogue is rather odd to read most of the time. Finally, some background on how the world and powers work would be good.

this novel seems to have enormus potential the world is a little unique to say the least I am very much interested to see the development of MC and his "strugle" for now MC is overpowered there are many question but i guess they will be answered further into the story