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Nekotakuu
NekotakuuLv12yr
2022-08-02 11:24

Although the idea of system and everyone getting them suddenly isn't something totally new as seen with a book I don't remember name of but everyone get system as gift on Christmas. But the thing about this book is writer had taken quite a unique take on it with territories and coins, the story have a nice flow and Bing readable waiting for more chapter to came so I can Bing read in a go

Supreme Territory System

Vks_sh
4.7
8 Chs

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Vks_sh
Vks_shAuthor

thnx for review and I'll improve update stability 👍

2yr
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Isaac_black
Isaac_blackLv13

heyyy author, well i got hooked by your first chap i am not usually into systems but yeah this one really took me by surprise. i think that this novel has a great potential and with more work and focus i guess it will top up among the others

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anisha78
anisha78Lv3

the storyline is improving each and every single day. The persona design, the plot, and the narration, the entirety is going smoothly and steadily. The quality is getting better too. The storyline has full potential to hook up it's readers. I surely suggest the readers to give it a chance, it will never gonna disappoint you. 💙

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Skull_emoji
Skull_emojiLv11

Well, well, well.... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. So you want to know what I'm about to say?😂😂 This story is awesome even though it has limited chapters, the first few chapters are great. You fell for my trick, didn't you?😂😂.. Now you're laughing 😂😂

2yr
Sam_3859
Sam_3859Lv1

The plot of the story seems new and interesting about how suddenly monsters appear, although only one chapter is out but character is portrayed nicely. The fighting scenes were written skillfully. I'm eager to know what will happen in the future and how the protagonist changes in these times.please update frequently as this story have potential.

2yr
Philip_Kathy
Philip_KathyLv1

I love everything about this novel, Keep up the good job. And I can't wait for the next update😘😘🥰😘🥰🥰😘🥰🤗🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰🥰😘🥰😘🥰🥰😘🥰😘

2yr
Main_Island
Main_IslandLv3

A fellow author here, Guy's my friend so I want to give a review. Do you have any problem with that? I don't care, okay? Well, no one asked. HHAHAAHAHA

2yr
Flower_Something
Flower_SomethingLv2

Instantly hooked amd already loved it- I read a few chapters an im definitely saving it to my library to read for later.

2yr
Eldritch_Umbra
Eldritch_UmbraLv1

For a first work, this is a start. I would suggest using paragraphs, rather than going sentence by sentence. Next, your descriptions could use some work. While they do get the image you want across, the reader has to make mental leaps to figure what's happened. The word choice could be a lot better in some areas, and the dialogue is rather odd to read most of the time. Finally, some background on how the world and powers work would be good.

2yr
Eclipse_Ranger
Eclipse_RangerLv3

this novel seems to have enormus potential the world is a little unique to say the least I am very much interested to see the development of MC and his "strugle" for now MC is overpowered there are many question but i guess they will be answered further into the story

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