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Elona_Alone
Elona_AloneLv22yr
2022-09-10 21:49

Reading chapter one, I suddenly felt pity for Theogo . It was almost like if I could see them beating him up . I like how the author portray that life is filled with a lot of immoral things. This is the author first novel, and I'm very impressed with what I have read so far . Grammer's are fine, and plot development is also nice❤️ I'm definitely going to continue reading because this is an excellent work filled with suspense at each chapter . Good job author and kindly update More chapters .

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Jaxmaa
JaxmaaAuthor

Man, thank you so much and I'm really glad that my first novel so far has been getting positive remark . Although you said there's no grammatical erro, there are definitely those readers with great grammar, which haven't given their reviews yet, finding one or two and also, the more you read it, the more you will see how much improvement there is in the write up's approach. Really appreciate.

Jaxmaa
JaxmaaAuthor

👍

Tommyshelby
TommyshelbyLv14

Harem

Jaxmaa:Man, thank you so much and I'm really glad that my first novel so far has been getting positive remark . Although you said there's no grammatical erro, there are definitely those readers with great grammar, which haven't given their reviews yet, finding one or two and also, the more you read it, the more you will see how much improvement there is in the write up's approach. Really appreciate.
PursueImmortality
PursueImmortalityLv14

Author is it Harem?

Jaxmaa:👍
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Jaxmaa
JaxmaaAuthor

I don't get you, pardon me, what's your point please?

PursueImmortality:Author is it Harem?
PursueImmortality
PursueImmortalityLv14

I want to know what to expect. Most authors on webnovel incorporate harem in most of their novels without tellling their readers. It just becomes a major letdown if the novel is really good only tor it to get fcked by badly written harem. At least if i know i wont be disappointed

Jaxmaa:I don't get you, pardon me, what's your point please?
Jaxmaa
JaxmaaAuthor

Oh I get you. No, it's not harem and the way you just started reading it, trust me, till the end will you read it like that.

PursueImmortality:I want to know what to expect. Most authors on webnovel incorporate harem in most of their novels without tellling their readers. It just becomes a major letdown if the novel is really good only tor it to get fcked by badly written harem. At least if i know i wont be disappointed
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4

Is there romance?

Jaxmaa:Oh I get you. No, it's not harem and the way you just started reading it, trust me, till the end will you read it like that.
Jaxmaa
JaxmaaAuthor

Yes there is a very weak romance but that is not the focus.

ILovemyself_84:Is there romance?
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4

In the end of the story will the Mc end up with a FL?

Jaxmaa:Yes there is a very weak romance but that is not the focus.
lord_of_all_realm_
lord_of_all_realm_Lv5

ILovemyself_84:In the end of the story will the Mc end up with a FL?
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4

So I assume that’s a no then?

lord_of_all_realm_:
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lord_of_all_realm_
lord_of_all_realm_Lv5

I really don't know, I just found your series of questions to be quite funny.

ILovemyself_84:So I assume that’s a no then?
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4

Oh ok 👌

lord_of_all_realm_:I really don't know, I just found your series of questions to be quite funny.
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