Reading chapter one, I suddenly felt pity for Theogo . It was almost like if I could see them beating him up . I like how the author portray that life is filled with a lot of immoral things. This is the author first novel, and I'm very impressed with what I have read so far . Grammer's are fine, and plot development is also nice❤️ I'm definitely going to continue reading because this is an excellent work filled with suspense at each chapter . Good job author and kindly update More chapters .
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LIKEMan, thank you so much and I'm really glad that my first novel so far has been getting positive remark . Although you said there's no grammatical erro, there are definitely those readers with great grammar, which haven't given their reviews yet, finding one or two and also, the more you read it, the more you will see how much improvement there is in the write up's approach. Really appreciate.
Harem
I want to know what to expect. Most authors on webnovel incorporate harem in most of their novels without tellling their readers. It just becomes a major letdown if the novel is really good only tor it to get fcked by badly written harem. At least if i know i wont be disappointed
Oh I get you. No, it's not harem and the way you just started reading it, trust me, till the end will you read it like that.