What an analyst

Such a turn about, okay, let's see what comes next.

You are welcome. I hope you will enjoy my story.

There is no harem tag, so... it means no 🥂

Nope. I don't write harems. Not my taste.

Tale of a teenager called Maximus. Being forced into becoming a Vampire Slave by Lucas, on the same night that he was betrayed by his girlfriend, he did something atrocious to his dear mother which if she should die because of it, he has no reason to forgive himself and, for sure, no one has any reason to forgive him as well. Imagine living in regret day after day, waiting to see your mother die because of you... Max did it. Imagine killing the family of an innocent five year old girl, making her an orphan for life... Max did it. If he can save his mom's life, do you think anything can stop him? But if he swears to protect Evelyn for life, can anything dare harm even a strand of her hair? No. World building is checked, believably fun to read, assumingly characters are alive as human beings, and hopefully the narration pace is quite a well done job. Furthermore, every volume to come can be a story you can read and then keep the book for some while all satisfied, unless you are hooked by the inevitable suspense currently charging up. Sorry, but humane errors are to be found once in a while, and maybe there might be a plot hole somewhere around despite how hard I tried to avoid them. Help me tackle them, mate. It is believed that the story shouldn't be anything boring. It is believed that the setting of the story is loveable and would be improved, how it'll carefully treat sensitive societal issues would be rarely seen, and the last battle between Max and... I recommend you try reading Blood Fiend Vampire because it is not going to be a boring short story, wouldn't be dropped as far as the author being alive is concerned, and there would be daily chapters update as far as you keep supporting it except under unfavorable conditions.

Yes indeed. There would be a specific volume basically on the rivalry between Max and Lucas. Thanks.

Thank you

You are welcome

You are welcome

That would have been a good idea. A bomb that could just explode and kill Evelyn at the moment.

She had a System Based Weapon, why not?

Two individuals mentioning fixing or editing the first few chapters? Time to clear this up. I can bet that the first few chapters need no editing at all. If you've seen any mistake, trust me, I've seen it already already. For example in chapter 1, Max is supposed to say "Ya" in his first sentence but instead, I allowed him to say "You" to show every reader that I'm also a human and mistakes are inevitable. Before publishing the first chapters, and still before publishing any new chapter, I reread them until I'm bored of doing it. What you think needs editing is definitely associated with how the MC, Max, utters many of his words. Call it his flaw, a flaw that would be explained in maybe around chapter 45-50 as for why he has it. Again, the way Max speaks needs nothing like editing; it is meant to be like that for a reason. Apart from that, something you might think needs editing can be my style of writing. It doesn't need editing as well. It is different, it is new, and developing like how any other skill develops with time. You'll know the difference if you are simply to check how I wrote chapter 16 (the latest chapter at the moment). Thank you for your review.

Thanks...

Evelyn

THhank yoOU