I'm going to give you an actual review, I've read all the chapters so far. It's .. OK , nothing ground breaking, but not bad either. IMO I feel as tho the pacing could be a little faster, & please stop the repetitions of scenes, you'll stay the same thing multiple times, one major thing .. it gets boring.To much info dumping, your action isn't enough & fairly less detailed than it should be, & Seriously the MC being low key is an annoying troupe, & really isn't necessary, truthfully most of these problems could be solved by him just showing his skills, but the "Peaceful life" bullsh** that he speaks is stupidity, you can have a peaceful life , in a world without magic, let alone one with it. This could be better & I hope it does get better
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moon_senpai:Well, thanks for the review. I was wondering what is that many readers are upset with but now I can see it. I'll try my best to improve so that you, and all the other readers can enjoy the novel.
definitely should listen to your readers if their means tend to make your novel better 👍
moon_senpai:Well, thanks for the review. I was wondering what is that many readers are upset with but now I can see it. I'll try my best to improve so that you, and all the other readers can enjoy the novel.
tf u talking about mate? a lot of us concerned about the plot and grammar too. if the plot and the grammar is bad, what's the point reading the novel?
Tee_hee:webnovel readers are concerned more about looking cool rather than plot or grammar. I'd advice you to not listen to webnovel reviews 97% of times.