Earl_McClain

this is trash & tired of the fake 5 star reviews all these less than mediocre books are receiving. for some reason you all for the same sh*t MC DIES- REINCARNATED TO MONSTER - GETS CAPTURED - STUPID MENTALITY - GETS STUPIDER. FIGHTING OR RUNNING AWAY FROM STRONGER ENEMIES- GETS SAVED BY (INSERT CHARACTER HERE) RINSE & FU*KIN REPEAT !!

this was the most bullshitery i have ever read... like no , you made every mistake you can make at the beginning of the book. plot armor OP MC✔️ STUPID MC ✔️ Supposed Veteran but not ✔️ 😂😂😂 no sir ... how in the hell is this at the top? that's how I know you guys be spamming reviews or making fake accounts to get your reading Views up. 🤦🤦 please stop, this is trash

Re: Monster is trash, nothing but a power trip fantasy

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this was a great book at the beginning, but seriously it delved into a troupe , human in monster skin, no true world building, as we barely know much about it. then lest not talk about Anna, it's her story apparently 🤷. but moku our "Supposed MC" isn't really likable, but you don't hate him he's just boring & closed minded. then you all these forms with different ideologies & background that truly isn't necessary to explain them in such detail; too much trying to promote his culture with the naming sense (Author him/herself). levels & ranks are too complicated , & too much emphasis on moku's power , not necessarily moku himself as growth in character. no is he allowing his other Main Orcs get Character Development. Orcs being in shambles (Crying) because his brother died is blasphemy , they are Raging creatures where killing is second nature death of those near is nothing new , they knew this before moku even came to their world. these aren't Orcs , Not Monsters , but just Green Humans smh 🤦 & please for the love of the readers who probably still read this , stop saying "Moku this Moku that each sentence. here's an example Moku looked up at his assailant, gauging the distance from which he could strike. Then he took a stance and activated his "Such & Such" form.

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I'm going to give you an actual review, I've read all the chapters so far. It's .. OK , nothing ground breaking, but not bad either. IMO I feel as tho the pacing could be a little faster, & please stop the repetitions of scenes, you'll stay the same thing multiple times, one major thing .. it gets boring.To much info dumping, your action isn't enough & fairly less detailed than it should be, & Seriously the MC being low key is an annoying troupe, & really isn't necessary, truthfully most of these problems could be solved by him just showing his skills, but the "Peaceful life" bullsh** that he speaks is stupidity, you can have a peaceful life , in a world without magic, let alone one with it. This could be better & I hope it does get better

Trash really, it's nothing but a children's book, with a bada*s cover , MC isn't an anatomist, he doesn't even know the basics of a sharks anatomy, let alone other fishes. He's like a child in his thinking, & just down right unlikeable.. did I mention he's stupid? & Why do you authors want your MC to be weak & have to follow some else's whims at the beginning of the story.. & a fucking turtle at that. this is supposed to be about domination, not submission

sorry I would rate it higher, because it's highly detailed , you can really understand the characters , but sadly the main problem is that it's misleading & boring... I couldn't even get past chapter 6 ... I skimmed to 12 to see if any changes happened like , our MC showing his face again & truly getting to understand the story. I'm confused if it's about the female Hales or not? I understand it's different P.O.V's, but we never see the actual MC, Nor do we understand the point of anything really. we got aspect which are powers, but what are the nations in this world & their motives? how does the world look ect.. too boring to continue

the only problem is it hasn't been updated... I need more .. it not many book that can match up to this one , & it's only 25 chapters in ....