Hey, the shameless author is here! Again giving my own novel a five-star rating! So this is my second novel and I hope you all will enjoy reading it, if you do enjoy then don't forget to add a review and share your experience. Also, take this review as a Q and A and ask me anything related to the novel in the comments of this review.

20 chapters in, honest review Facts first: MC is op right from the start, is staying low-key, is very smart. Good points: The writing is not cringe (very little) He was training for 5 years to become from C to B for his stats.(character building) His sister seems to find something odd with zero since his sickness and mc took his place. Potential good development plot. Bad points: I don't really like the 'Status system' in the magical world. MC parents straight up just ask him his stats and did not use tools to ascertain his potential. Then there's the timeskip from his isekai date to 5 years later. It skipped on so much family interaction that could have happened (specially since MC said he became emotionally attached to them like real family) Potential writing on MC coping with the isekai skipped. For all these iskais, i can't help but think these MCs liked the isekai world better and wanted it. Anothet bad plot was the story building to the tournament arc which was basically none. The tournament was just dumped in there and the info that the kingdom's princess would come is also dumped in. Furthermore, this tournament is called 'the best warrior of the decade' but it is conducted in some small city and MCs parents said that Anya was the strongest in the city with average E rank stats. Not much sense. This arc can only be called lazy. For all the supposed grandeur, MC was able to sign in his own sister as a contestant without her knowledge (though he did tell his sister he had a plan). This just shows that the security for the tournament very very low. Again not much sense. Then another thing dumped in there is MC suddenly becomes a smart schemer who sees everyone as a 'piece'. Just like that, no development prior. Mind you he was a normal average guy in his previous life Lastly, the fact that he was able to set an explosive (dunno how he could even know how) under the princess platform is just idiotic. Royalty of a kingdom and any B rank magician can just slide in and harm her life. Where is the security, royal knights. Moreover, after she was saved by Anya (for the plan) ,she comes to MC mansion on the same day! So no going into hiding after an assassination attempt. Following logic, there should be an investigation to find to attackers. But she just travel across the city to MC house wih only 4 guards. No logic. I don't know if the plot building gets better and im not gonna stick around to find out. Just my opinion.

too many Novels extra and authors pov copy are floating around webnovel. At least that is the first impression this gives. but i will rate this again after reading this. 5 star in advanced cause it aint easy to write a quality novel. i myself quit midway.

I'm going to give you an actual review, I've read all the chapters so far. It's .. OK , nothing ground breaking, but not bad either. IMO I feel as tho the pacing could be a little faster, & please stop the repetitions of scenes, you'll stay the same thing multiple times, one major thing .. it gets boring.To much info dumping, your action isn't enough & fairly less detailed than it should be, & Seriously the MC being low key is an annoying troupe, & really isn't necessary, truthfully most of these problems could be solved by him just showing his skills, but the "Peaceful life" bullsh** that he speaks is stupidity, you can have a peaceful life , in a world without magic, let alone one with it. This could be better & I hope it does get better

After reading the first 30ish chapters I can say that this book is good and has the potential to grow. The MC is smart and because of his knowledge of the cliches of a fantasy novels he is able to use it to his advantage. Writing Quality is good with almost no grammatical errors. Stabilty of Updates will keep you reading almost everyday. Story Development isn't rushed and has resonable pacing. Character design so far is good World Background follows mostly the same concept as other fantasy novels 8.5/10 for me I sincerely hope, that the quality won't decreas but rather keeps growing overtime

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i would say that this story is mid at best. some parts are just downright weird and are way too convenient for the mc.

All I'll say is that this novel seems to be perfect in all aspects(except the fact that I want mc to be stronger than Leon). The writing quality is pretty good, the world background albeit not explained in detail is still pretty decent. I like how not every other guy in here is an annoying guy who just tries to kill mc for no reason. I also appreciate the fact how mc is actually able to keep his powers hidden. Usually in other novel, even if the mc is meant to hide his powers, he ends up revealing it to a bunch of people(often girls) as soon as he physically can even though it's against his goal. So.. yeah just give this novel a go!

It starts off pretty alright in terms of concept but for me and a lot of people it soon turns into a bunch of cliches with MC acting weak. MC not being believed. MC saying he wants a peaceful life. and some of these feel forced which makes it even worse. On a positive note there is no super long drawn out revenge for the MC to get.