Review Detail of _eellaabbee in The Not So Acceptable Mate

The story began with an intriguing beginning that enticed the readers to read on. The story development and world background are both well-crafted. The way each character exchanged words was realistic, and the author's narration of each scene was well-detailed; it was a pleasure to read. And the author did an excellent job with the characters, especially Avery's adorableness. This is fantastic work; keep it up!