I just answered a while ago a question that goes like this- What is the scariest word that an ET can say to you? And I answered, "I can see you". And then I read this chapter where the villain, aka lead man of this story, said to his prey "I CAN SEE YOU". Gosh, the story just managed to get into my nerve.

Nice story. It is well written with interesting characters, especially the female lead. She's full of angst. I will recommend it to other readers. Good job, Author.

Thanks for that wonderful comment.

Since I started here at WN, I kept seeing this story but just ignored it because I judged from its cover that it will just be all about pornographic scenes which are kinda boring at times. But because its title always makes me curious about it, I opened it last night. And, it was nice.  Got hooked on it even though I am not into gaming. I'll try to finish it if I can.

Nice intro for the lead characters. Seemed like the good and the bad ones.

I am a sucker for a fast-paced story so I'll suggest to the author make its pace a bit faster not because it's what I preferred but because I believe it could make the story better. The content is good, the characters are fine, and the writing is alright. Overall, it was fine and still has a lot of potential to offer.

hi, thanks for the review.

The story is nice and intriguing enough to look forward for the next chapter. What I don't like though was the character of the male lead. I hope his character development will progress as the story continues.

Thanks for reading smiling_osha. Glad you like the story.