I don't plan to insult or offend anyone this is just my review. It has an interesting premise, and you can see that the author puts effort into it, and that he knows the original plot. But that's where the good stuff ends, then you have a stupid mc, with nonsense and stupid plots and cliches. The mc having a "power" or "personality" or "second soul' that can possess the body of the mc, and that has more knowledge than the mc himself... The mc knows that he is a laboratory rat and even so he decides to become the government's dog, without any doubt or desire to betray him. Besides, they want to turn the mc into a weapon and what they do is take out what allows him to better control his powers, and they take it away...
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Well, I don't think anyone will get offended (I don't think I have fanatical fans), but well, if you were to read it for some more chapters, you would realise why he's doing what the govt. says and why he isn't rebelling...yet (and I'm pretty sure he's thought of rebelling and killing many times). I don't know till where you've read, but well, most likely you haven't read it properly. Of course, they took away his eyes because it was too dangerous for them, which I'm pretty sure I explained. They took it as an insurance in case he ever rebelled, and also are using it in various ways which will be explained very soon. But well, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, even if they don't read the full thing. ;)
oo, I say this more out of habit than out of courtesy as before, you literally can't say or give an opinion without being offended or thinking that you're attacking them, even if you don't even have anything to do with them. PS: you literally said that their power came from their eyes so I'm not wrong(and the worst thing is that he can still use his powers). Besides, you say that they are very dangerous, but that doesn't make sense since they want a weapon, for example, what would be the meaning of having a fighter jet if you do you remove combat weapons?
SoManyAngels:Well, I don't think anyone will get offended (I don't think I have fanatical fans), but well, if you were to read it for some more chapters, you would realise why he's doing what the govt. says and why he isn't rebelling...yet (and I'm pretty sure he's thought of rebelling and killing many times). I don't know till where you've read, but well, most likely you haven't read it properly. Of course, they took away his eyes because it was too dangerous for them, which I'm pretty sure I explained. They took it as an insurance in case he ever rebelled, and also are using it in various ways which will be explained very soon. But well, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, even if they don't read the full thing. ;)
I didn't say his powers come from his eyes, but that his eyes are an important part of him, and allow him to access more of his powers. Also, they didn't remove combat weapons from the jet, they just reduced the speed, so that it the pilot can control it and the jet doesn't just go haywire, crash and kill the pilot. Also, nw, didn't get offended anyways. :)
Salmon_El_Solomon:oo, I say this more out of habit than out of courtesy as before, you literally can't say or give an opinion without being offended or thinking that you're attacking them, even if you don't even have anything to do with them. PS: you literally said that their power came from their eyes so I'm not wrong(and the worst thing is that he can still use his powers). Besides, you say that they are very dangerous, but that doesn't make sense since they want a weapon, for example, what would be the meaning of having a fighter jet if you do you remove combat weapons?
