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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv142yr
2023-02-18 10:16

Always wanted to read a fanfic of this anime but this aint it for me. while I'd rather not read one about a villian, specifically cuz its this anime, the villian isn't written well at all. To invest in a villian MC you need a good origin to make it appealing and immersive. this didn't do it for me but others might like the story so give it a chance before accepting my words. Just attempting to write is impressive so good luck with this story.

Reincarnated into a world of Modern Magic

SoManyAngels
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SoManyAngels
SoManyAngelsAuthor

Thank you! See! This is what's called a good review! Even if Dreamer doesn't agree, at least he isn't straight up dissing the book! And true, I should have built up the backstory more... kinda just rushed into things without planning before. Have changed now though, and write outlines first and then the chapter. And well, tbh Alaukik isn't a 'villain' in that sense of the word, but then again, it's up to the readers to decide how they see the characters. For me personally, Alaukik isn't a villain character, and he hasn't really done anything 'villainous'. Anyways, before I start droning, thanks for the review!

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gargantaaa
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stupid fanfic . .

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Reveal spoiler

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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

I don't plan to insult or offend anyone this is just my review. It has an interesting premise, and you can see that the author puts effort into it, and that he knows the original plot. But that's where the good stuff ends, then you have a stupid mc, with nonsense and stupid plots and cliches. The mc having a "power" or "personality" or "second soul' that can possess the body of the mc, and that has more knowledge than the mc himself... The mc knows that he is a laboratory rat and even so he decides to become the government's dog, without any doubt or desire to betray him. Besides, they want to turn the mc into a weapon and what they do is take out what allows him to better control his powers, and they take it away...

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Yami_Sensei_25
Yami_Sensei_25Lv4

I think more details are necessary but it's readable, he have an op power but he is the problem which makes this unique. I'm not done until the latest chapter, I just want to ask how many more estimated chapter till the canon and will he join from the start or after a certain event.

2yr
Peyalll
PeyalllLv3

Is he will be able to get back his eyes? Before the canon start or he will be like blind for the rest of his life? Or the rc will use his eyes for themselves?

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jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

SoManyAngels Keep up the great work Can you please do this fanfic called Irregular at Magic Highschool: The Shadow Monarch immdiately after Reincarnated into a world of Modern Magic Oliver was always a fan of the Shadow Monarch system from Solo leveling. He also watched Irregular at Magic High School anime and read the light novels. So when he dies, he is reborn into the world of Irregular at Magic High School with the powers of the Shadow Monarch. Harem Claudia Enfield Ezra Scarlett Minerva Orland Stella Vermillion Ikaruga (Fairy Tail) Flare Corona Norma Selner Saegusa Mayumi Watanabi Mari Shibata Mizuki Ono Haruka Saeki Hiromi Fujibayashi Kyouko Ichijou Midori Shiba Sayuri Helen Schneider

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Tenzing_Choeying_5139
Tenzing_Choeying_5139Lv14

This story is very good and I really enjoy it, hope the author doesn’t drop

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AyanoChibi
AyanoChibiLv13

This novel has potential with the original ideas the Author has, if he can start the school arc already (please be in first high) and the oc isn’t another background character who gives his input every now and then. Your writing quality has definitely improved over the chapters and is much better, keep it up! Please make sure the oc is included in the main story, so he has his own moments.

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