Although it is not super obvious you begin to notice that some parts are vastly different than other parts of this story. The author copied many ideas, phrases, sentences and whole story points from other fanfics. It is a work of theft which I can only rate 1/5. It should not even be allowed here. The only reason it is allowed is because he stole from so many works and twisted those idea together into a friggin monster, making it somewhat a original. Anyway. I can't tolerate this at all. If you have ideas, write a story. Don't steal the good parts of other stories and just change the names....
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LIKEIf the author needs to steal different ideas & copy entire passages during the very few first chapters and now after like 5 chapters he doesn't update anymore what does that tell you? If you have no own ideas and steal from elsewhere and still quit after just a few chapters then your entire work is trash. Sorry but it's the simple truth.