A kid mc? what's up with this new trend of writing kids with incarnated souls as the main characters? what's the appeal behind this trope? I would've liked to give this novel a chance but kid mcs are instadrops for me, can't deal with mcs being constantly underestimated because of their body or having their cultivation slow down because "muh body isn't developed, i can't breakthrough! muh foundation!"
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Well, thanks for your review but I will try to fix your misconceptions in it. first of all, my MC is indeed a kid. But, he won't have any kind of shortcomings from it throughout the story, no lack of body growth, no slowing down of getting stronger, nothing of that sort. Second of all, this is not a cultivation book so your second point is also wrong. Anyway, don't consider this as a persuasion to read my book or anything like that since I always say to readers that if you don't like it then don't read it. I will also leave this review. Have a good day :)
bandit who already explored in this forest 99 times only get killed by kid mc. man, kid mc are dangerous!
The sick part of it is that you have grown women (in their 30’s) that are romantically obsessed with the child MC. One of them even kisses him in an extremely uncomfortable way. The MC is 10!!!! You are literally sèxuàlising a child for over 100 chapters (which is where I stopped reading btw). If you wanted to write a novel about adult relationships and twisted yandere romance, why did you make your MC a child? I don’t understand why so many authors are into this genre recently, maybe that is what does it for them nowadays. Unfortunately, it just makes me uncomfortable.
Bruh, it's a fantasy. a fiction. I am not doing a crime am I. if it's not your cup of tea than just drop without says anything. You should already be aware of this fact from the first 2 chapters.
No, it’s not a crime. It’s just really weird and uncomfortable. You’re a grown man right? Then why are you writing a novel that sèxuàlises a pre-pubescent boy? It sounds really weird when you read it like that doesn’t it? Have him grow up before you include stuff like that because again, its super weird!!!
if by grown man you mean I am some 30 year old guy than no. I am 17..second of all, as I said, if you hate it just drop. I can't care any less if you don't really like what I write. iit's your preference and I respect it. there are other people who like reading this genre since it is nothing but a fiction. nothing like this will ever be real.
I would consider 17/18 to be an adult, yes. The genre is sick and you’re sick for writing it. Imagine if it was the other way around. A 30 year old dude gives a smothering and decidedly not platonic kiss to a little girl younger than 10. Suddenly, that doesn’t sound so fun anymore, does it? Just because the protagonist is male, that should not matter, it is the same thing in principle. It’s just wrong.
sigh, thanks for the insult. just because I wrote some imaginary stuff that will never happen and that i don't accept, I became sick. bruh, you are too soft for this world if some book made only for entertainment would scar you this much. just leave bro, I can't be bothered to even argue with you.
Thanks for the warning, I guess this falls under shotacon or whatever which is just uninteresting.
some of the novels that are made are actually in the realm of the author's imagination, where the author gets an idea suddenly and makes several other arrangements before making it into a published story, so, sometimes, even though there are some readers who don't like it and insist, the authorsometimes it can't be that easy to change the story, because, in addition to imagination and ideas that come suddenly, some writers also have a future concept of the story, even though the concept is still vague. I salute the author of this story, although many readers complain, but still continues the story to hundreds of great chapters. If only I had more free time, I would also like to continue my own story like this writer. good luck.
17 isn't an adult just wanted to let you know
Thank you for the review, knowing this novel is focused on ped0philia helps me make my decision about whether or not to read it. Author should really put a disclaimer about that in the synopsis.
when will the mc become and adult/teen? Or is he going to be 10 for the whole story?
Don't argue with english people, unless you want to turn into their eternal slave tea maker.
Appreciate the heads up on this one.
Let the author write whatever he wanted.No one is forcing you to read it. So what if you don't like it! it's not like the author will stop whatever he/she is writing just because you don't like it. Instead of complaining and telling the author that you don't like the genre or the content of the novel do something more productive and make a fair review. IT'S A FICTION!! OK It's a product of people's imagination it's not like the author is commiting a crime. Everyone is free to do whatever they want as long as it's not a crime. AND don't bother to reply to this cuz I won't be reading it I don't have the energy to deal with people like you. (What's the point of reading fictional novels if you'll treat it as reality, Go out of your house and enjoy your life instead of complaining here)
