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Daoist7HM5pe
Daoist7HM5peLv29mth
2024-07-11 00:59

This was one of my favorite novels until the story quality went downhill. The author didn't know what to do with this novel after the MC became the pope. The author/mc is obsessed with collecting women and little girls like Pokémon.. at some point it starts being suspicious. And his obsession with his mother is weird.

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DaoistIUeJPg
DaoistIUeJPgLv14

I agree he should’ve put more emphasis on the war arcs to make them more action packed and he could’ve done so much more but yeah like you the quality went down🤦🏾‍♂️🤦🏾‍♂️🤦🏾‍♂️

MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthor

I agree with you there. Personally, my downfall began from Masan Empire arc. Well, I got no excuses. I was tired and burnt-out back then. Should've planned better instead of chasing daily upload schedule.

Cheese_curdles
Cheese_curdlesLv4

Damn, author. How are you now? It's honestly refreshing to see how far you've come. I was a bit late to the parth only getting here when you had 600 chaps on the Glanpa book. I thoroughly enjoyed your books, they're what got me through quarantine along with Chrysalis. I just want to show my gratitude to you, someone I don't know, but am well familiar with through your vision.

MisterImmortal:I agree with you there. Personally, my downfall began from Masan Empire arc. Well, I got no excuses. I was tired and burnt-out back then. Should've planned better instead of chasing daily upload schedule.
MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalAuthor

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my work.

Cheese_curdles:Damn, author. How are you now? It's honestly refreshing to see how far you've come. I was a bit late to the parth only getting here when you had 600 chaps on the Glanpa book. I thoroughly enjoyed your books, they're what got me through quarantine along with Chrysalis. I just want to show my gratitude to you, someone I don't know, but am well familiar with through your vision.
I_am_UNKNOWN01
I_am_UNKNOWN01Lv4

when will you complete this novel

MisterImmortal:Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my work.
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Zhawan2002
Zhawan2002Lv14

sorry for that, but yes, your right ive actually observed that already specifically on that sandwall arc, mc being killed and revived, the flow turned bland and slowly generic, bruh there were commenters already predicting what happen on prev chaps cause it was so generic. only compensating is the smart antagonist, but the mains were being nerfed in character and dialogue.

MisterImmortal:I agree with you there. Personally, my downfall began from Masan Empire arc. Well, I got no excuses. I was tired and burnt-out back then. Should've planned better instead of chasing daily upload schedule.
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