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2022-06-21 23:29

I like the concept of this novel. It reminds me slightly of “the holy emporer is my grandfather”. And the idea that the mc can launch crusades and create a holy empire is very appealing. Currently it’s just him as an infant but it’s already developing very well. My only issue with this novel is the believers may not have much depth. For example the mother or the inquisitor. I’ve seen a couple of such novels where it has the side characters be really fanatical. And because of that they don’t even have their own personality. But it’s still too early to say anything about this novel so I wish the best for you author.

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MisterImmortal
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Oh, the Inquisitors are supposed to be fanatics. Most casual people only fear the church and don't really believe in anything, some are fanatics among them too. Most Kings and Queens dislike the church but can't go against it. Most high ranking people in Church will be either fanatics or simply Solis believers who recognise the problems in the church but ignore it because they feel church is necessary for the world to function.

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