Review Detail of Spelloyal in Titanfall in Marvel
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The story is a bit confusing, things just don't seem to fit together and the war in the simulation was too forced. The fanfic idea is not bad, but I think the author's choice to give everything to the MC right away was not good. If it had started slowly, with the MC needing to develop from soldier to pilot and finally captain of a starfleet it might have been interesting, but as it stands the fanfic is simply not interesting.
Titanfall in Marvel
The_Puffer
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I disagree, this could be done by entering the MC as a soldier along with captain america and basically this being the initial training along with some system simulations. He doesn't need to be in the titan fall world to get everything little by little
The_Puffer:I could've done that but nearly everyone wanted to see Marvel. If i did that, I would've need at least 10-15 chapters which no one would stay for that long.
Well yea but that would be too boring and there are already too many fan fics like that. So I thought I could make a difference or something
Spelloyal:I disagree, this could be done by entering the MC as a soldier along with captain america and basically this being the initial training along with some system simulations. He doesn't need to be in the titan fall world to get everything little by little
Listen Titanfall already had the idea of starting as a soldier turned pilot so why not be original and start as a pilot 😎
The_Puffer:Well yea but that would be too boring and there are already too many fan fics like that. So I thought I could make a difference or something
ThanatosGreekGod:Listen Titanfall already had the idea of starting as a soldier turned pilot so why not be original and start as a pilot 😎image